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Jun 26, 2006 13:16

TITLE: First Kiss ( Read more... )

Comments 10

lolitaray June 30 2006, 11:46:30 UTC

Oh wow. Thank you for this, the love that Jack is feeling just radiates out of this vignette...innocent and heartfelt. Just adored this piece.:)

Ahhhhh.... sid401k July 4 2006, 01:06:51 UTC

Oh, this is so sweet. It makes me melt into a happy little puddle.

sassym July 4 2006, 02:32:05 UTC

love this... So glad I'm making my way through this thread.
rnmina aka sassym on LJ

elanorsam September 27 2006, 03:54:26 UTC

Wonderful. Really sweet; I loved it.

from iwishiknew anonymous September 29 2006, 03:05:26 UTC

W.C., This was so perfect. More erotic than half the heavy stuff ever written.

I can but imagine you must have a deep love of your own for a man you adore beyond life itself to have written this. As one who does just that, you've got it!

"The most beautiful creature Jack has ever beheld." If you never write another word you could be remembered for this alone. It's so perfect because you make it clear that Jack is looking at more than good looks. He is looking at the face of love. His love. His man. Wow.

Re: from iwishiknew wildcolumbine October 5 2006, 03:39:37 UTC

Bless you. I'll treasure your comments.