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Apr 10, 2008 22:23

THE OUTLAND

Genre: AU
Rating: NC-17 (for entire story)
Feedback: Any and all is welcome
Disclaimer: These are Annie Proulx's brilliant original characters and her story, and I have treated it and them (and her) with as much respect as I can muster.
This story is for Canstandit, and this chapter maybe should be subtitled "Ranch Life".

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tizi17 April 10 2008, 18:33:04 UTC
yes, that's the style i love, i sure do..
thank you so much for this story and great update!

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wildcolumbine April 19 2008, 03:16:36 UTC
And thank you for taking the time to read and comment. Always welcome.

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rosiet April 10 2008, 19:28:28 UTC
Jack's finally living his sweet life.... and it's beautiful to behold... but Alma is a blot on the horizon...for sure...

Thank you for another wonderful chapter..

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wildcolumbine April 19 2008, 03:17:22 UTC
Every silver lining has a cloud :).

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Great chapter pearl_1 April 10 2008, 20:04:08 UTC
Loved this chapter. Great glimpse into their life on the ranch.
Now.... what the hell does Alma want?

Karen

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Re: Great chapter wildcolumbine April 19 2008, 03:18:03 UTC
Hi Karen. Glad you liked the chapter.

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acquaalta April 10 2008, 20:22:53 UTC
Soooo nice.
Don't you worry about the "Ranchers Handbook" descriptions. It was absolutely amazing. Felt like being right there. Fantastic insight to their everyday life and work and reality.
And everyday love.
Jack finally having his dream come true and Ennis at his best.
Everything to good to be true??? Now, what is Alma up to?

Thank you for another lovely update.
All the best, B.

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wildcolumbine April 19 2008, 03:18:51 UTC
I'm so pleased it didn't come across as dry and boring. I find all the farm stuff fascinating but then I'm slightly weird. :)

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The Outland Chapter 8 bmshirts April 10 2008, 21:09:19 UTC
Nice look at every day ranch life. I don't like OMT snooping around though. What Ennis and Jack do in their trailer on their own time is their business, not his!
And we all know it's Alma on the phone! I'm sure she's going to try to stop Ennis seeing his daughters by telling them about their father and Jack. I hope it backfires on her big time!!!
I'm suspicious about Gerry coming to help with branding. I've got a feeling he's interested in Jack, a lot interested!!
Rob is going to have to be told the truth also.
Everything's just got to work out for the fellas. They've gone through so much and finally have the 'good life'.
Thanks. Carole

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Re: The Outland Chapter 8 wildcolumbine April 19 2008, 03:19:57 UTC
I'm so pleased the little bits of tension are bleeding into the story. I'm not very good at writing plain old happy times, I'm afraid.

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