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Apr 10, 2008 22:23

THE OUTLAND

Genre: AU
Rating: NC-17 (for entire story)
Feedback: Any and all is welcome
Disclaimer: These are Annie Proulx's brilliant original characters and her story, and I have treated it and them (and her) with as much respect as I can muster.
This story is for Canstandit, and this chapter maybe should be subtitled "Ranch Life".

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Comments 82

brokeback1963 April 10 2008, 21:28:50 UTC

Love this story every day a lot of more!!! Every time I read a new chapter I spend at least the night thinking about it. Always poetry, tenderness, a kind of sadness and much love. Bittersweet stunning writing, precious imagery ( ... )

wildcolumbine April 19 2008, 03:21:17 UTC

Awww! Thank you for that lovely comment. It's nice when readers spot some of my own favourite lines. I always love reading your comments.

grlewis April 10 2008, 21:31:50 UTC

good job. very realistic ranch details.

hmmm..'there was no reply, just a quiet click as the caller hung up.'
why in the world would alma be bothering ennis or the twist family?

wildcolumbine April 19 2008, 03:21:58 UTC

Why indeed? :) Glad the ranch stuff sounded realistic.

Love it wayne1932 April 10 2008, 21:45:38 UTC

Can't add anything to the commments already made.

Keep on writing.

Wayne

Re: Love it wildcolumbine April 19 2008, 03:22:28 UTC

Wayne, I certainly shall keep on writing. I'm becoming addicted to this story :)

julietteh April 10 2008, 21:46:28 UTC

It's incredible to me you think this would sound like the Rancher's Life when what you have accomplished here is the ultimate sunshine drenched "little cow and calf operation." I'm going to the fiction thread and recommending this chapter for everyone, even those who don't read this story for whatever reason.

I don't think Alma calling is so bad. I think that his kids will stand by their daddy, and they should know who he is.

What I do find imposible to believe, though, is that Rob doesn't know. I mean, come on!!!!!!!!!!!!! Seriously, he MUST. WildColummbine, what is your take on that?

JMP

wildcolumbine April 19 2008, 03:23:52 UTC

You know, Juliet, Rob is only seventeen and maybe he doesn't want to know what others may see more easily. Kids can be like that. Heavens, Ennis was like that for 20 years. But Rob will grow, believe me.

mel0804 April 10 2008, 22:49:36 UTC

Beautiful update.
Thank you so much !

wildcolumbine April 19 2008, 03:24:15 UTC

Thank you for reading and commenting. Always appreciated.