oh god it's like you've given me another puzzle piece but this mean absolutely nothing because you can't start putting the puzzle together until you have them all and man, this was phenomenal
a proper comment will come sometime soon. dear lord. i am in awe.
harry is lunar, his mood recedes with every pull of the tide. liam wouldn’t understand, he’s too steady, like a sunrise. this is beautiful. All of this is absolutely incredible, I wish I could be more coherent about it but all I have to say is wow.
I feel like I could never put into words how exceptional this is and any attempt would just muddy this brilliance. Your words cut and soothe, they shine and dim, they trigger hope and despair in equal measures. I really, really, really adore this series.
UGH THIS WAS SO INCREDIBLY NICE THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! i really love writing this series and to have people to share and enjoy it with is such a pleasure! thank you so much for your interest in my words and hope you enjoy the rest of the sequence :)
Oh gosh, this is jus so wonderful. I didn't get to write a comment on 'it's bad religion so I'm making sure that I do on this. Anyways. It's just perfection. Your words flow together so nicely, and the writing is just beautiful. I'm in absolute awe. {it's quite hard to put into words how much I absolutely adore the whole ocean sequence so far.} my heart just breaks for all of them, because they all have their own mistakes they've made that they carry with them every day. And just, liamandzayn's love for each other is wow. Wonderful, and realistic and so strong yet so breakable. And then louisandharry, they're just something else. I can't even describe it. How gut-wrenching their whole relationship is. And then Niall. He just wants to help everyone and I'm pretty sure that he's my favourite in this. I love how you have him explain to Louis why he let Liam win. Basically; this whole verse is flawless and I wish I could lock you up in my closet an have you write me things every day.
omg first of all thank you so much for leaving a comment. i really do appreciate every word of kindness for this sequence.
and yes, this series is quite heartbreaking. writing this, i really made sure to give each character a human aspect in that they each have their faults and their glories and the 'chains' that they have to carry with them.
liamandzayn is more of the classic domestic couple with the superstar twist. they have a more internally conflicting issue and lack of communication problem while as harryandlouis are unconventional in every aspect possible so it gives a sort of balance to the sequence?? and of course niall is in the eye of the storm and he contributes to the story in a way no other character does.
and UGH school is starting back up and i really do wish i could hide in your closet and write rather than go to class. thanks for reading, darling <33
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a proper comment will come sometime soon. dear lord. i am in awe.
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this is beautiful.
All of this is absolutely incredible, I wish I could be more coherent about it but all I have to say is wow.
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and yes, this series is quite heartbreaking. writing this, i really made sure to give each character a human aspect in that they each have their faults and their glories and the 'chains' that they have to carry with them.
liamandzayn is more of the classic domestic couple with the superstar twist. they have a more internally conflicting issue and lack of communication problem while as harryandlouis are unconventional in every aspect possible so it gives a sort of balance to the sequence?? and of course niall is in the eye of the storm and he contributes to the story in a way no other character does.
and UGH school is starting back up and i really do wish i could hide in your closet and write rather than go to class. thanks for reading, darling <33
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