Ugh, god, okay, this killed me, like always. First off, I’m a dumb little nerd so I had to point out all my favorite lines for you because this is what I do with my life, and then we can get on to the actual review and if you respond again oh my god elle I’m just leaving commentary because I don’t want to text you all of this don’t feel obligated to respond okay cool here it goes
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And WOW okay apparently I talk (that's not the right phrase but whatever) too much because it cut me off?? How dare you, Livejournal. But yeah, I loved your description when Louis met Zayn for the first time, too. That really got to me. I loved your description in general in this piece, as an entirety and all over. The part where Zayn says he’ll always love Liam a little bit more than Liam will love him…god that just ruined me and absolutely tore me apart. And I reread the third part of Liam’s bit just to basically reconfirm how fucking SAD and horrified I feel for Zayn and all that he’s been through with Liam, because he loves Liam SO MUCH, and no matter what, it’s not enough, like I feel like it is with Louis and Harry; Louis loves him so much even if he has to sacrifice him, sacrifice what they have, what they had, for something he wants so much too; nothing he ever does will ever be enough
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i can't write another ridiculously long essay comment like i did last time. this just broke me down and kept going and going. you're brilliant, honestly. this was beautiful. but it just hurt so much.
i'm sorry to have made you hurt! but that's just the way love is. (omg i just quoted myself) but really, you are so so kind and thank you for following me on twitter and telling others about my work. you are phenomenal and i can't thank you enough :)
ahaaahaa fucking ha. you will rue the day you found me on twitter coz now i can scream at you incoherently whenever I read your fic but omg in all seriousness can I please have your talent? the imagery you create, and the way it extends and entwines throughout the entire piece is just so beautiful and the feelings this verse has been stirring in me are just ridiculous. love ya babe <3
hahahahah no problem! i love being tweeted so feel free to tweet me anytime even if it's not about the fic!
and shut up dude you're ultra talented too but thank you so much for reading sweetheart i'm so glad that you've enjoyed it and that you like the repeated motifs!! it means so much!
if you honestly think i won't be tweeting you all the time, you are sadly mistaken tbh (you sign a hidden contract when you hit that button) you're too sweet xxxx
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i hate and love and feeeeeel for this. louis, you miserable bastard i love you.
i'm going to need some processing time - but know this - you are incredible at what you do so well.
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this just broke me down and kept going and going.
you're brilliant, honestly. this was beautiful.
but it just hurt so much.
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but omg in all seriousness can I please have your talent? the imagery you create, and the way it extends and entwines throughout the entire piece is just so beautiful and the feelings this verse has been stirring in me are just ridiculous.
love ya babe <3
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and shut up dude you're ultra talented too but thank you so much for reading sweetheart i'm so glad that you've enjoyed it and that you like the repeated motifs!! it means so much!
love you back <333
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you're too sweet xxxx
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