fic: "Show Face" (4/4)

[wildejoy]

There will be an epilogue to this, just so everyone knows! =)

Title: Show Face (part 4)
Pairing: Jesse/Rachel
Rating: PG (this chapter)
Word count: 3,795
Summary: This is the story of how Rachel manages to turn Jesse from the Phantom of the Opera into Raoul, and completely without intention. Jesse is dumbfounded.

From Sectionals to Journey (and beyond):

Comments

[nesza]

I love how you wrote the progression towards Jesse's second chance. The whole story is very well written. Please write more fics.

[wildejoy]

Thank you. =) I definitely will be writing more of these two - I love them far too much to quit!

[alabellavita]

Alright so reading this over coffee was probably the best start to a day I could ask (this is my more subdued HOLYSHITIT'SUPDATED when the caffeine has yet to kick in but tastes lovely)

but he’s trying to remind himself there’s a significant difference between persistence and stalking.

I literally laughed into my mug at this. You go Jesse, you listen to your Police songs and remember Every Breath You Take encompasses that difference. I loved this chapter because it was a great summary of the differences between high school and college and how jarring it would be to someone like Jesse who was such a big fish in a small pond. His periodic wooing was sweet, but really my favorite part was Rachel's double slap. DAMN GIRL, YOUS FIERCE.

Epic epilogue will be epic!

[wildejoy]

"You go Jesse, you listen to your Police songs and remember Every Breath You Take encompasses that difference."

Have I told you lately that I love you?♥ XD

Thank you so much. =) I promise to try and have it up soon. I think having more pressure on me - with all the request fics and a couple kink meme claims - made me more relaxed about this, haha.

[alabellavita]

Well we are on a very strict time table here on the internet and will obviously be timing you....kidding, I'm sure it will be wonderful ♥ (As will the kink & fic requests because I may read everything, and comment even as anon, and it is all made of YUM!)

[wildejoy]

Haha! Oh, but don't comment anon - it's not like I've even written or claimed anything very depraved. Yet. ;)

[cut_thestring]

and then wastes half the day making sure his hair is just right.

That's SO something he would do. Hell, that's something I do if I'm bored enough. I love how Andrea's not completely antagonistic here. (:

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And now I've read the rest.... Wow. :D:D I'm grinning like a madwoman, seriously. I love this fic so much. This epilogue better be freakin' large. *hugs fic tightly*

[unseensorrows]

LOVE THIS STORY!
This is amazing!

Would you possibly consider a sequel? Because I love your writing and this plot! ♥

[wildejoy]

Aw, thank you! I don't know about a sequel - I'm not sure I have any ideas for one - but I'm certainly going to keep writing these two, I can guarantee!♥ I love them far too much to stop.

[unseensorrows]

They're a VERY addicting pairing that's for sure! I'm so glad to hear it :D ♥

[owlemporium]

I love you. Seriously, I do. This was way good! I loved it. (:

[wildejoy]

Aw, thank you! =D