Comments | wilwarin1: FIC: Midnight Battle (1/1)

wilwarin1

FIC: Midnight Battle (1/1)

Nov 13, 2007 21:04

Author: Wilwarin1
Rating: PG (for some mild language issues)

Word count: 1310
Type of story: Pre-series
Pairing: John Winchester, Jim Murphy, Teen!Dean (age 17) and Teen!Sam (age 13)
Disclaimers: I´m just borrowing the characters of Supernatural. Eventually I will give them back, scarred, but otherwise okay.
Summary: It isn’t a snowball fight so much as ( Read more... )

fanfiction, supernatural, pre-series

Comments 15

limejuize November 13 2007, 21:03:18 UTC

That was awesome! I love how you had both Jim and John join in the fight. (A person is never to old to play in the snow, and if someone says otherwise tackle them and stuff snow down their paints. It is really fun *grins*) Great fic! I had fun reading it.

wilwarin1 November 14 2007, 09:39:44 UTC

Well, you're talking to someone who is an expert in midnight snowball fights. My Dad would always wake my brother and me up if there was snow (we get very little of that here). Great fun!

Thanks!! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

kimonkey7 November 13 2007, 23:01:46 UTC

*wraps up in your story like it's a warm blanket*

You always have such a nice way with humanizing John, and making Jim a real character. It's hard to remember sometimes just how little of him we ever got.

Thanks for this toe-freezing, heart-warming read. :)

wilwarin1 November 14 2007, 09:43:44 UTC

Well, John is very much a human being under that hard outer shell. I've made it my personal crusade to make sure nobody forgets that. LOL!

And Jim...sigh...

I miss them both. Sniff..

Thanks for your awesome comment, K.!

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wilwarin1 November 14 2007, 09:44:26 UTC

You are very, very welcome!!

embroiderama November 14 2007, 02:23:59 UTC

I love this--the fun of the "old" guys mixing it up in the snowball fight and then the sadness of John knowing that Sam is going to pull away. *sigh*

wilwarin1 November 14 2007, 09:46:30 UTC

Yeah, I think John has always seen that day coming. He knew he couldn't hang on to his sons if they really wanted to go and that's why he fought so hard to keep them.

It must have been hard on them all.

Thanks!!

saberivojo November 14 2007, 03:09:32 UTC

Nice job. I really got a kick out of Jim cursing a blue streak and Sam's "Dude!"

Very nice. Leaves me feeling all warm inside. Do you mind if I friend?

wilwarin1 November 14 2007, 09:50:17 UTC

Yeah, that bit had me grinning like an idiot when I wrote it. I could see Sam's face there, all big eyes, mouth open. He must have been used to his Dad and brother cursing a lot, but with Jim being a preacher and all...

It's so good to hear you felt all warm after this. It's exactly what I felt writing it. I'm so hoping we're getting serious snow this winter.

And sure, friend away!!