{exo} made in the shape of each other // krislayhan

Aug 10, 2012 14:38

Title: made in the shape of each other
Summary: and made to enter the water together. krislayhan olympic synchro diving AU.
Rating: R for brief sexual content.
Word count: 4.5k

triangles are my favorite shape / three points where two lines meet )

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herocountry August 11 2012, 06:28:20 UTC
AHHHH CATHY YOU DON'T KNOW HOW HAPPY I AM THAT YOU REALLY DID FINISH THIS ;___; god your writing is so beautiful, i don't even know what to quote bc it's not so much striking singular lines as it is all your recalls and images developed by the paragraph

one of you is yuan, the other is fen. AUGH. JUST LIKE BING, KILL ME. layhan is not my Favourite Ship, but they are my most solid number 1 termination endgame ship (i feel like that is a requirement between us actually) and god this just kills me, THEIR TWINNESS i just love everything about them aesthetically and interactively, how they complement and mirror each other ;~; synchronized diving is actually the perfect metaphor for layhan, let me die, this stupid yuanfen line is going to be with me forever and i will say it to my bbs or smth. YUANFEN IN THIS FANDOM IN GENERAL, GEEZ. The photographers often joke, you are your own second take. ughghghghhg everything about this description ( ... )

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nisakomi August 11 2012, 07:00:26 UTC
I can't even begin ( ... )

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shirahimejj August 11 2012, 21:00:48 UTC
This was amazing and beautiful and gorgeous with the details about the diving and the relationships and how it all intertwined... *picks jaw back up* I don't know how to lay the praise on thickly enough, but I'll string together a couple of coherent sentences...

That was a great read~ I've only ever followed diving peripherally, but I'm willing to believe all the details you've put forth and Lay and Luhan as the symmetrical pair and Kris's place in life all just flow so well. Well-written is an inadequate label at this point...

I really should've read more slowly to savor the details properly. Boggles my mind when I stumble on really fantastic stuff on the net. ^^;;

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galmaegi August 13 2012, 07:54:54 UTC
this is beautiful. your writing is wonderful, the details are impeccable, and the three-way dynamic seems so ideal and at the same time real.

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emberberry August 14 2012, 21:04:32 UTC
oh my god this fic is absolutely gorgeous. pulled on my heart in all the right ways. I love this so much, and this ot3. thank you thank you for writing and sharing. never stop writing. ♥

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