And thank you for reading and that comment, it means a lot. I'm going to be worrying all summer about the show, there was something so desperate and hopeless about Logan in the finale that keeps sticking with me.
That's awfully flattering, thank you so much for leaving such lovely feedback! On both, too. I've spent the past week reading TwoP and trying to get a look into his head, I'm glad it worked at least a little.
Your stars add some brightness into my post-finale life. :-* Thank you; I wrote this in bed after the finale because I couldn't sleep at all, the pages show the mark of true frenzy, man.
I know. :| It's awful, but that scene at the beach just refuses to leave me alone. He was crying! His hair was ungelled! Jason Dohring is fantastic.
Just, wow. This has a very lyrical feel to it and it is just really stunning. I usually don't like second person narrative, but you did a very good job with it. I'm sure that Logan's thoughts are this disjointed and messy, which is why this works.
I'm a sucker for writing second person, something about it is so natural, but it is difficult to not overdo it, so I'm really glad that you found it believable. Oh, Logan. No words!
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I know. :| It's awful, but that scene at the beach just refuses to leave me alone. He was crying! His hair was ungelled! Jason Dohring is fantastic.
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This is lovely.
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Thanks.
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