Another Short Saiyuki Fanfic - Cigarettes

[winged_sandals]

I almost named this little fic "Addiction" but there seem to be a lot of fanfics with that title, especially about Saiyuki (and I think I may have even written a few...), so I called it "Cigarettes" instead.  Which may or may not be used even more.  Either way, I lack any talent for coming up with titles, haha.

Title: Cigarettes
Word count: 494

Comments

[eerian_sadow]

lovely.

[winged_sandals]

Thanks for commenting!

[befanini]

I adore your abstracted-ness (not a word, I assure you XD) and your subtlety in describing Gojyo's character through your chosen medium. It is very skillfully done; and I get the sense that what Gojyo derides as his "addictions" are actually reflections of the kind of man he is, the personality he has: intense and raw and deeply rooted in the senses and the sensual.

Wonderful work.

[winged_sandals]

(Well, it should be a word. >.<) Thanks so much for commenting!

[lillypuff]

Wow, this was fantastic hun. You've hit the nail on the head with this one. And that last line, so perfect and so true!

[winged_sandals]

Thanks! I'm glad you thought it worked

[winged_sandals]

Haha, Gojyo probably would give up cigarettes in a blink for Hakkai... Begrudgingly, but in a blink nonetheless. XD (Those poor Hi-Lites and their lack of vocal structures...)

Thanks so much for commenting!

[despina_moon]

Nicely done! You've really captured Gojyo's personality in all it's glorious messed-up neediness.

Thank you for sharing.

[winged_sandals]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it