Fic: Static (3/?). Hisagi/Kira.

[winteraconite]

Title: Static (3/?)
Author: winteraconite
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Hisagi Shuuhei/Kira Izuru
Notes/Warnings: Yaoi. ANGST. This is actually a late (like whoa) birthday gift to two of my favorite persons here in LJ: barukode and annieroo2. Also written for prompt #32: Regret @ 50scenes.
General Summary: Betrayal is a blade that cuts deep, and you have to wonder who you can really trust.

Comments

[mako_pretty]

I'm reading it! I just fail at reviewing, and often can't think of what to say. But I did like this chapter, the emotion is good, and I like how you write Kira especially.

[winteraconite]

Hiya, Misu! Happy to see you're still reading this! XD

I'm glad you liked this chapter. I had a hard time writing it; I really didn't want to go overboard with the emotions and I also didn't want it to be too long. And I'm happy you like this Izuru! I happen to like him a lot myself! Though I can't imagine Shuuhei shares the sentiment. XD

Thanks for reading and commenting! ♥

[gypsygrrl420]

I am totally still following this! Please--I NEED to know what happens next!

[winteraconite]

Oh, hey! Awesome! I was beginning to think people had forgotten what this story was about. XD

Working on the next chapter as I type! Here's hoping it won't take me another six months to cough it up! T_T

Thanks for reading and commenting! ♥

[ceestar]

I'm reading, I'm reading!!!

It is always so interesting to see the bumps in the road of their relationship, it is so rarely looked at. Aaah, men and their pride >__<

The opening of this chapter was sooo good, hooked me right in, then we go to look at how the boys are both handling the situation separately, then how they are doing as a pair as well. And it is heartbreaking to see them hurting like this!

I do hope you continue this Antha, and I wish you all the best for it!

[winteraconite]

Hur hur well, we both know how much we love making these boys miserable, yes? 8D

I was hoping you would like the opening as I remember you saying you like it when these boys are out on assignments and missions! Too bad I wasn't able to really delve into the boys' hearts and souls this time. I didn't want to go overboard with the emotions and neither did I want to make this too long.

And it is heartbreaking to see them hurting like this! Oh, but we love it! We are so mean!

Thanks, Cee! I really hope it won't take me so long to cough the next chapter up but every time I say that, I end up taking forever! D:

Thanks for reading and commenting! ♥

[reasonfalling]

Gah those two are killing me. I'm so upset with them it's kind of scary. Men and their pride... dear god. So stubborn.

Loved it, as usual. And I really hope that the next chapter come out soon!!! I'll go insane with the wait if it doesn't T.T Haha.

[winteraconite]

Lol. Did you have to go back and read the first two chapters? Gah. am so sorry this is taking me forever! There's a reason I stick to one-shots; my attention span is SO short, it's actually a miracle I got this far into a multi-chaptered story!

But I will work on the next chapter as hard as I can!!! *pumps fist into the air*

Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and commenting! ♥

[barukode]

BWAAAH!

I fail at commenting on time.

Can we just talk about how much I love the way that You write them? You have such a wonderful grasp on their characters; Kubo would be proud. I love the drama. I hate to admit it, but Christ, I love the drama. Stupid, stupid boys! And hoh, snap. I love love LOVE the fact that Shuu brings up the "Is it heavy?" line to Kira. It is so perfect. He totally knows how it made him feel to hear someone ask him, and he pushes it onto 'zu as well. Agh! Wonderful wonderful. Stupid boys >< I cannot wait to see where You take this. Thank God some people who write fanfiction use a plotline ^^

And thank You so much for wishing me a happy birday! You didn't have to dedicate anything to me, You sweetie-pie!

Why do stars fall down from the sky everytime You walk by? Just like me, they long to be close to You.

[winteraconite]

You were online at the time?! ARGH I should have stayed on longer (I thought you were asleep)! I miss talking to you!

And ::blushes:: I'm really happy you like it, Zuzu! These boys do drama so well, no?! 8D

You didn't have to dedicate anything to me, You sweetie-pie!

Dearest, don't you say that! I wish I could give you more! You are such a gem in my life, how could I miss the opportunity to remind you of that? I do constantly think of you and wish you all the happiness in the world and I miss you and love you and and and okay, I will stop creeping you out now. O_O

Thank you for reading (I really hope you didn't force yourself to read this just because it was for you omfg that was not my intent! T_T) and commenting, my love! ♥

I LOVE YOU SO MUCH! ♥