LJ Idol Exhibit B - Topic 1 - Intersection - "You Gave Everything You Possibly Could"

May 14, 2013 20:45

I gave everything.

Mind.

Heart.

Body.

Soul.

Along with that; love, trust, honor, loyalty, and respect.

Everything that was asked for. Everything that was expected. Every single thing for a period of several years.

Yet still, it was not enough. My Keeper had made his decision. Every gift I had given, he was now returning to me.

Oddly, this moment was unlike ( Read more... )

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myrna_bird May 16 2013, 13:00:03 UTC
I haven't yet read the intersection but at this point I am Leary that she may be out of the frying pan jumping into the fire! Very intriguing and well written!

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witchdollie May 19 2013, 04:17:57 UTC
Such is the danger when one's only desire is to be loved. Thank you. :)

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maneless May 16 2013, 13:38:03 UTC
i really like your writing style so far; very fluid, you choose your words well.

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witchdollie May 19 2013, 04:18:19 UTC
Thank you very much. ♥

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adoptedwriter May 16 2013, 16:25:12 UTC
Sounds a bit spooky and sad. At frost I was wondering if this was a circus animal whose Keeper had abandoned them or if it was a human. Interesting. AW

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witchdollie May 19 2013, 04:19:17 UTC
Every story has a bit of truth behind it to some degree. :)

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witchdollie May 19 2013, 04:20:06 UTC
I hope so as well.. but one can never be certain. :)

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redqueenofevil May 17 2013, 01:55:53 UTC
Oh wow. This sounds like such a compelling, yet terrifying world. I really like it.

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witchdollie May 19 2013, 04:20:30 UTC
Thank you very much!

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