origami

[witness_light]

your look, that tenderness

Comments

[darthcrank]

wow. That is hot and touching all at the same time. Another one for the fridge!

[witness_light]

thank you so much! *flutter*

i love trying out ways to write about sex so that i don't have to use unpoetic porn words like cock or supercheezy romance novel words like throbbing member etc.

it's also a challenge to convey intimacy and physical passion at the same time. i'm glad to know that, at least for you, i succeeded. :)

[tspeeddemonx]

that is definitly one of your best poems!