honeysuckle

May 26, 2005 16:18

a slow white swirl
of fragrant
petal
fluttering
to the gutter

i love such small
creatures
for a moment
of light
caught in my throat,
my heartbeat

days later she wilts
into the sidewalk
where my steps pass
over her brown
corpse

oh, i know you love me
falling as i do
before your face
for a moment
in the spring.

poetry

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red_oonagh May 26 2005, 18:10:55 UTC
I know I love you.

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witness_light May 29 2005, 12:37:40 UTC
love you too!

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tortugaguapa May 26 2005, 22:41:26 UTC
This kind of imagery and thinking really reminds me of Japan. I think you would enjoy the sakura festivals, where everyone is looking at the cherry blossoms.

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witness_light May 29 2005, 12:37:57 UTC
oooooh, that sounds beautiful.

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vivdarkbloom42 May 27 2005, 13:58:31 UTC
hey q...i really really like this one. rock on

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witness_light May 29 2005, 12:38:34 UTC
thank you!

missed you at the 'no last night, i was hoping to see you there... and more sparkly kisses. ;)

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vivdarkbloom42 May 30 2005, 23:00:03 UTC
oh, i was out of town. but i'll definitely be at leather and lace. yay for sparkly kisses!

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