Cameron/Sarah: Time Loop 72

[wkgreen]

Comments

[storm_8]

Ah, I feel kinda sad now... But it was so well written, so I'll forgive you ;-)
I especially liked your description of everything that's going on around them and also of the Resistance fighters moving towards the HK tank...
I had missed your Time Loops!

[wkgreen]

Thanks for forgiving me for making you sad. ;)

It was interesting writing the battle scene, how much detail to give. If give to much, bog the story down, if I don't give enough, you'll don't get a proper sense of the chaos of battle.

More are on the way as I get time to write. :)

Thanks for commenting. :)

[fig_aruna]

Oh, wow... That was a really moving elaboration of what might've/could've happened in VS...

[wkgreen]

Thank you! (passes the kleenex) Thanks for commenting. :)

[conbug]

Ah....

I was so happy to come home from work and find a new time loop (I love um so much).

It was nice (not that i like dead sarah) seeing a not happy ending, i had assumed that not all the loops would be happy ones, and as normal you don't disappoint. I really liked the description of cameron just holding sarah, and the battle carrying on, then being found and just left only until Savannah came.

Have to go and read a happy time loop now LOL

[wkgreen]

Yeah, they can't all be happy endings. Cameron knows that her love is going die and all she can do is delay that day. And then she goes to start all over again. Good thing she isn't human, she would go mad.

On to happy time loop! :)

Thanks for commenting. :)

[carinjo]

oh damn. beautiful.heartbreaking.

[wkgreen]

Thank you, glad you found it beautiful, heartbreaking and thanks for commenting. :)

[darxe]

Once again you have written an excellent Loop ... sad but excellent. I love reading these, the happy and the sad. I love them all.

[wkgreen]

thank you very much. I enjoy writing them. And am glad others are getting enjoyment out of them too. :)