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jen_sparks June 20 2010, 10:27:22 UTC
This one was very sad... even had something cruel and psychotic with the way Cameron handles Sarah's death. It's the price she has to pay for being able to return to her again and again. Specially liked the bit where she said she cannot stay for the funeral, that's heartbreaking. And Savannah.. between the actual series, the VS and this, you writers put that poor girl through so much pain! Still like it a lot, as always. Great work! Keep 'em coming.

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wkgreen June 20 2010, 13:20:54 UTC
Yes we have, going to have to give her some happy time in the future. :)

Yeah, Cameron can be psychotic and cruel, she is a cybernetic organism and while she has developed emotions, she doesn't have alot of the systems for social interaction that humans are hard wired for.

Glad you enjoyed and thanks for commenting! :)

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paperpixie75 June 20 2010, 11:11:45 UTC
This one had me tearing up a bit. So glad you included Savannah in the series. Please keep the story coming, I really enjoy this series.

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wkgreen June 20 2010, 13:23:02 UTC
The VS squad did such a great job of developing Savannah, I had to bring her into my world. :)

Glad you are enjoying the series. :) Thanks for commenting. :)

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revolos55 June 20 2010, 14:36:52 UTC
:`(

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wkgreen June 20 2010, 14:59:25 UTC
(passes out more kleenex)

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wkgreen June 22 2010, 13:15:22 UTC
Thank you very much.

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1shinyboat June 23 2010, 03:32:01 UTC
How did I not see the last portion of this chapter...?

*scratches head*

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wkgreen June 23 2010, 06:19:47 UTC
Huh, where did you stop reading??

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1shinyboat June 29 2010, 14:38:46 UTC
Nevermind...I'm slightly crazy *L*

*waves sheepishly* carry on, I'm going to go find that straight jacket I misplaced. =0)

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wkgreen June 29 2010, 17:29:52 UTC
hehe.. okay. :)

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