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silver_parpar June 25 2010, 05:25:57 UTC
oh my god wow. this was just heart wrenching. i think this has to be my number one time loop you have written. how you convey love and sadness is fantastic.

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wkgreen June 25 2010, 06:00:42 UTC
Thank you very much. Glad you liked it.

And thanks for commenting, helps me know what I did right. :)

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freakykaethe July 7 2010, 19:11:21 UTC
omg that was so sad! I mean you've written it very well, I enjoyed reading it. But you know, it's sad to see Sarah die. And then Cameron's reaction. Heartbreaking.
I'm now thinking about having to see your love die over and over again.. Would be so hard to live with.
Thanks for showing as the not so happy side of this :)

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wkgreen July 8 2010, 00:18:07 UTC
Yes it would be heartbreaking. Would probably drive a regular person insane, fortunately Cameron is not.

Glad you enjoyed reading it and thanks for commenting. :)

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olli01a July 25 2010, 01:52:33 UTC
Again a sad part. But it is well written and Cameron's reaction is understandable. It is a surprise that Savannah is a Commander in the resistance and certainly a surise that she considers Sarah and Cameron being her mothers. An interesting detail about her third mother.

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wkgreen July 25 2010, 05:04:40 UTC
Thanks. And have you been keeping up with the Virtual Season? I stole umm.. borrowed, borrowed Savannah from them. ;)

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olli01a July 25 2010, 20:37:43 UTC
Sorry, I'm somewhat behind with the VS but I'm catching up.

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wkgreen July 26 2010, 12:47:41 UTC
Good, it is really well written. :)

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