oh my god wow. this was just heart wrenching. i think this has to be my number one time loop you have written. how you convey love and sadness is fantastic.
omg that was so sad! I mean you've written it very well, I enjoyed reading it. But you know, it's sad to see Sarah die. And then Cameron's reaction. Heartbreaking. I'm now thinking about having to see your love die over and over again.. Would be so hard to live with. Thanks for showing as the not so happy side of this :)
Again a sad part. But it is well written and Cameron's reaction is understandable. It is a surprise that Savannah is a Commander in the resistance and certainly a surise that she considers Sarah and Cameron being her mothers. An interesting detail about her third mother.
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And thanks for commenting, helps me know what I did right. :)
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I'm now thinking about having to see your love die over and over again.. Would be so hard to live with.
Thanks for showing as the not so happy side of this :)
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Glad you enjoyed reading it and thanks for commenting. :)
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