You're in a car with a beautiful boy, Dean. ( Part II )

[wnchster]

This is one of those feelings you don’t want to name. It’s

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[huntingbros]

That was amazing. I really REALLY liked that point of view. It's something else and it was enthralling really. And you hit both boys on the spot.

"Thumbs pushing into denim, an animal inside you has finally been let loose and as you push Sam back into the steering wheel he makes this sweet noise that you catch with your mouth."

made my heart beat real fast ^///^

thanks so much for sharing!

[wnchster]

Thank you so much! I really don't know what to say but thank you. ♥

[sagetan]

This is lovely. I love how frantic and yet dreamy it feels, and the second person pov works beautifully here.

[l_lyla_l]

What an amazing story. You captured them both so well and it was so beautiful and yet so broken.
I really like your writing style. It feels poetic in a natural and unforced way.
Hopefully, there will be more of you in the future ♥

[allydenise]

Such beautiful writing. Really, really lovely. <3

(I'll just be over here, waiting for some more, I'm in no hurry to be elsewhere...)

[wirepatch]

This is so gorgeous; it literally left me breathless.