The Last Train
The Last Train
Eunhyuk/Heechul, AU, PG-13, 1813 words, Archive
A/N: For catskilt's pornaloudinc prompt, "last train, kyuhyuk or hyukchul". I'm sorry, love orz
original post @ pornaloudinc
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Eunhyuk/Heechul, AU, PG-13, 1813 words, Archive
A/N: For catskilt's pornaloudinc prompt, "last train, kyuhyuk or hyukchul". I'm sorry, love orz
original post @ pornaloudinc
( The end goes something like this. )
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Eunhyuk drops the class. a beat here.
I like that there's a lot happening and not just as inner monologue either.
Eunhyuk doesn't invite him there, and there isn't any asking. nice ♥
descriptions! OMG IM NOT DRUNK ENOUGH TO LOOK AT YOU YET erggghhhh!
That maybe this is Eunhyuk's need for something beyond the edges of sobriety, his need for something beyond the principles he doesn't adhere to. THE AUTHOR SPEAKS. I love this piece of meta here.
I think it feels a little rushed at times but this may be one of my favorite hyukchuls ever now. it's insightful in ways I haven't seen. I love that Heechul sullies up his life, and he needs him to. only half my brain is on right now so maybe I missed the larger picture. WHATEVER I READ WHAT I WANNNT OK :3 ♥
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That was the 'dick' I was talking about! :D There would've been more, but you just can't force these things :( Or I can't ._. ... And it still came out feeling rushed... I can't tell where though haha TT
To me, it's not so much insightful so much as... this is kind of how I see them, in a way? What happened was that I started with the first scene here, and the rest is just answering "how did he get there?". I'm not sure if that came through, or if any of it even matters. Only that they crossed paths at some (or many) points and there was hurt ._.
Gah, to be a favorite is such high praise TT Thank you~~~♥♥♥
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Things always come together in the end; I believe anyway 8) Thank you for your comments~!^^
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Thanks for commenting!
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Okay so I really liked the feeling of this. It was simple and quiet and full of textures ♥ and your writing just flows really smoothly and makes this so nice and calming to read.
Eunhyuk is lucky that no one picked it up while it was sitting out there, abandoned. It is a very cold day and he would be sad without it.
This kind of narrative is awesome, when a matter-of-fact, or insignificant detail gets thrown into a sad, serious scene. Doesn't detract from the tone but adds to it, somehow. And it is! Sad!
"Alright," says Crazy, "Screw the roster, that was a bad idea. We're doing sign-in sheets from here on out. You don't come, fuck you, you deserve your F or miracle D."
Eunhyuk drops the class.
What a promising beginning, lolol.
He can't find it in himself to tell Donghae that he sort of highly rejects his cat-hobo friend with the bad helmet haircut and wannabe shades.
<3333! Hyuk and Heechul are at such opposite ends. I think this is probably why I adore them so much together ( ... )
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I was worried that people would have to make leaping bounds to put things together...... to put them together ._. The times when they're close and distant and hurting and not! So difficult to put in words. ARGH, writing this was so worth it though ;; Thank you~~~~~♥♥♥♥♥!!!!!
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Thank you so much for your comment! (And I love your icon btw ;;♥)
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