Today is The Greatest Day

[wonderboy12]

This is just a tune I'm working on. I haven't ran it by anyone yet. I was hoping to put it up here and maybe Sam will read it and give his opinion. It isn't that great. Kind of a slower song. I don't know what I want it to be yet. It has the same tune as "Thirty Three" the Smashing Pumpkins because I have been listening to that song a lot.. So it

Comments

awesome shit

[anonymous]

jay p, i must say from my my viewpoint that was very well written. i like it alot, and its kinda different than some of the shit you hear out their, whether it be singers or songwriters(or a singer songwriter?) or from some1 who thinks they r a good writer but actualy they suck and need to check themselves be4 tthey wreck themselves, but u my frend r damn good. keep the songs comin, il keep the guitars pumpin, and kev and phil r gonna keep the drums/bass bumpin.

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[anonymous]

that was jay o by the way.... ya.
~Jay O

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[xbeautifulbitch]

GOOD JOB ಌ

[animuspoeta]

yeah, I agree with Jay O, the rythm is good, has variations in it, and i like the lyrics, they are down to earth, and could be anyone's life, you know.

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[xsweetx_xheartx]

aww that was GOOD!