A rubbery solution [R; Luffy/Zoro]

May 27, 2008 14:57

Title: A rubbery solution
By: worblehat
Fandom: One Piece
Pairing: Luffy/Zoro
Rating: R
Summary: Zoro and Luffy go shopping for condoms.
Notes: I've only seen 30 episodes of OP and this is my first fic, so...er. I did my best.
Word Count: 3,706

A rubbery solution )

medium, one piece, adult

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Comments 16

aliquot May 27 2008, 22:31:57 UTC
Ok I haven't read it yet. But if you make me like them in an NC-17 type way I will be impressed.

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worblehat May 27 2008, 23:04:18 UTC
I don't think I will... But if it makes you laugh, then I still did part of what I set out to do~!

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takewing May 27 2008, 23:46:24 UTC
Oh god, this was funny and cute. Pairing's not my cup of tea, as you know, but I find it just funny thinking of Luffy in sexual situations and how that would work given his... innocence, for lack of a better word. I think you hit that pretty damn well!

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worblehat May 28 2008, 00:09:34 UTC
That's mostly what I was going for - the porn angle didn't work as well for these two, sadly. Hahahhaa, it was kind of funny trying to imagine this because...yeahhhhhh. He's not too sex-oriented there. :|| Thank you! I'm glad you liked it, especially given that it's kind of...a chance to read something with these two that's adult-rated. Haha.

♥!

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takewing May 28 2008, 02:38:22 UTC
It didn't work in a way that I'd go, "whoa,m that was so hot!" It did work in a way where I'd go, "aw, that was cute!" So it's all in how you define how something "works"! I did enjoy it though. :D

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jazzyjello May 27 2008, 23:48:52 UTC
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oh my god THIS WAS HILARIOUS. And hot. And awesome! Hahaha dsmakdsl I'm going to be converted to this ship DAMN YOU.

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worblehat May 28 2008, 00:07:45 UTC
Excellent! It was meant to inspire some giggling. Hahahhahahah. You say that like there's something WRONG with it. :||

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jazzyjello May 28 2008, 00:32:41 UTC
Oh it DID. XD

:| PART OF ME JUST DOESN'T LIKE IT. I FEEL LIKE THEIR DYNAMIC/RELATIONSHIP IS AWESOME...BUT I ONLY SEE IT AS PLATONIC. SO I HAVE TO RESIST. :|

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worblehat May 28 2008, 00:37:30 UTC
I totally understand! I would gather most people feel that way, actually - though I only know of the OP fans on my flist, since I haven't ventured into the fandom itself AT ALL. I just...I dunno. I like their dynamic. And I guess I wanted Luffy to get some, hahahhaha.

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prpl_pen May 28 2008, 05:58:32 UTC
Hahaha, I liked it a lot! Granted, I don't have a very good feel for the characters anymore, but they seemed good to me. I agree with Missa that the sex came across as more cute (and oddly innocent) than hot, but it suited the story, I think, so it all works out~!

My favorite part was the Insto-SleepTM for both of them right after they came. XD

I don't have a OP icon, so have Isshin instead.

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worblehat May 28 2008, 21:19:19 UTC
I still haven't watched that many episodes yet but I feel like I did them enough justice, based on what I have to work with. I'm glad you enjoyed it! It was fun to write - and I know, it's going to take a while for me to figure out how to have Luffy interested in sex without it being totally out of left field.

HAHAHAHHHAHA. It just seemed canon. >.>

Isshin is always acceptable. ♥ ♥ ♥

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roseveare June 29 2008, 20:18:01 UTC
This was really neat. Luffy seems VERY in-character. I love stories that look at how Luffy would approach sex because, as in the comments above, it's so removed from what we get to see of him in the manga/anime. :)

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worblehat July 11 2008, 23:24:45 UTC
Awww, thank you! It's definitely a challenge to see how Luffy would approach sex, hahahah. I hope you enjoyed reading it. :)

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