[oneshot] blind
Title: Blind
Pairing: Sehun / Luhan
Rating: R
Summary: You can't see me, so I love you like this. My blackened and bruised heart, reaches out to you, but your eyes look past me and tell me it's only pitch black outside. You just endlessly look out the window as I slowly fade to dust and disappear.
( (It isn't until later, when they're covered sticky and hot, that SeHun asks for questions and LuHan easily answers, hands combing through SeHun's hair in mindless affection.) )
Pairing: Sehun / Luhan
Rating: R
Summary: You can't see me, so I love you like this. My blackened and bruised heart, reaches out to you, but your eyes look past me and tell me it's only pitch black outside. You just endlessly look out the window as I slowly fade to dust and disappear.
( (It isn't until later, when they're covered sticky and hot, that SeHun asks for questions and LuHan easily answers, hands combing through SeHun's hair in mindless affection.) )
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why wouldn't luhan wake up? T_T
so beautiful but i don't like sad moments (not good with angst type stuff)
that was so sweet of luhan though but still T_T why can't he wake up? he should be happy with sehun now :(
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luhan is in a coma ;( so he's in a deep sleep after the fight hehe ;;
thanks so much for reading! \o/ ♥
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I believe he will wake up, and then they will happily life together with loooots of fluff and smut and all this nice stuff xD I'm so sappy today ^^
I loved reading this :) gangster/cop storys are always nice to read, and I really like it that Luhan is so dominant and seductive ^^
nice one!
PS: are you on a writing high? :D Not that I'm complaining, but nearly every new thing in my inbox is a story from you ^^ I like!
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the writing was really eloquent, the plot was good, and all the little details were as well!
i liked that lulu was a princess, as sehun put, but he was also a dominant princess at that. hehe, it was quite interesting to read.
plus cop!sehun sounds pretty hot >8D
i also liked how you didn't put smut in detail, and kind of just ghosted over it, because i like that in this fic, that it's not completely centered around smut. smutfics are okay to have a lot of smut but this one is just perfect the way it is~
oh and it was interesting (i'm not articulate, sorry for my recycled language >.<) that you left the story sort of open-ended (is that the word?). i like to think that lulu woke up later and rode off into the sunset with sehun~ or something like that. had a happy ending and whatnot <3
anyway, i'll be memming this :)
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aaahh, i've been hoping to read this kind of au for hunhan.
i'm glad someone finally wrote one! and it's very well written too~
thank you for sharing this. ♥
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and can i just say i'm a big fan of your writings (silent reader/cough/) so this comment means so much omg /sobs/ (i think i saw you comment on one of my other fics too ;; but i just hadnt realized it was you until now otl)
anyways, thank you for reading ♥
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b-but you should say hello sometime! i don't rly bite orz <33
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tbh i'm just such an awkward turtle when it comes to commenting ;;;; lol like. i just dont know where to start ;A;
and. cough.
did you see mubank.
/i'm dying/
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