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[wormjerky]

Nine to five square

Water cooler conversationalist

I can't
I can't
I can't

Go blindly into the streets,
In my SUV with kids in tow
making my way to soccer practice
while constantly kissing you providing ass

I envy the homeless
not the rich

For that reason alone

I will not be your bitch

Comments

[corriganus]

Do not go quietly into that night.

[cyberdependent]

I like it, very good. I just had one small question regarding my interpretation...

The 10th line... is it proper the way it is written, as a sort of "kissing you, providing ass" line relating to the husbandly expectation of the continual sexual availability of the wife, or is it read more of a "kissing your providing ass" relating to the expectation of a wife to show a high level of deference to her husband out adherence to a provider/provided power dichotomy?

[wormjerky]

I meant to type "your" didn't check it. And it was reference to the latter.

I've recently aligned myself into the dating scene which subjects me into the societal norms and constant disappointment in the evolution of man itself.

[cyberdependent]

"societal norms and constant disappointment"

Six of one...