Hips

Jan 30, 2010 00:19



Emily was so glad to be out of the office and with people. She looked around the bar at the happy faces and the laughter. It lifted her heart to see that the world went on, that the horror she saw day after day hadn't leaked into the world at large.

She slipped into a stool at the bar. "Corona Please" the bar tender was waiting for her order. He ( Read more... )

criminal minds, emily/jj

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authorw January 29 2010, 14:34:59 UTC
Love the fast pace of the story!
This was great.
Love the ending!

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worst_liar_ever January 29 2010, 23:30:54 UTC
Thanks!
The ending was what started it all.

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steppenwolf_20 January 29 2010, 15:27:33 UTC
she doesn't watch foreign films and correct the subtitles,
LOL
It's geeky isn't it? Nice choice!

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worst_liar_ever January 29 2010, 23:35:10 UTC
Totally geeky. That's why we love her right?

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steppenwolf_20 January 30 2010, 07:19:58 UTC
Teehee *g*
it's made by rocxmblover

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worst_liar_ever January 30 2010, 08:10:19 UTC
*grins* I hoped someone would apreciate that!

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cmfanz January 30 2010, 09:39:03 UTC
Emily will recognize JJ's hips anywhere! cute :-))
I liked it.

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carinjo January 30 2010, 12:37:12 UTC
first fic ever? not bad at all. happy endings rule! and emily's musings were pretty funny: "The brunette wondered if she was Emily 2.0. Faster, better, stronger? "

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worst_liar_ever January 30 2010, 23:39:24 UTC
Thanks. I was hoping it was acceptable.
I'm glad you liked it!

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