heres a poem i wrote about a girl

Aug 12, 2004 10:34

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urallalone August 12 2004, 17:45:54 UTC
HAHAHA.... mark.. i didnt knwo who the hell this was i couldnt tell from ur user picture...

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wowimabigboy August 12 2004, 20:34:00 UTC
ya u thought the poem was good?

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urallalone August 13 2004, 16:49:20 UTC
yea it was pretty cool u wrote it?

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sumwut_tangible August 12 2004, 17:50:58 UTC
OH MY!
your background has to be the funniest thing I've seen today, and quite possibly this whole week.
that's great.

that's cool that you can write poems and be brave enough to share them with everyone.

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wowimabigboy August 12 2004, 18:18:28 UTC
do u like my poem?

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my honest opinion sumwut_tangible August 12 2004, 18:29:35 UTC
well it's better than anyting I could probably write,
it's good,
but I read your poems on earlier entries and I like the first two you wrote ALOT better.
those two are really good.
this poem has a lot of cliche phrases in it where as the other two did not.

but overall, good job.

and I like the whole "zach and kelly" thing, because it's saved by the bell and that show is only the greatest.

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Re: my honest opinion wowimabigboy August 12 2004, 18:33:09 UTC
ya im posting new poems like every other day so just keep lookin, and tellin me what u think of them

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chekoutmyassets August 12 2004, 18:13:42 UTC
what up m. serano! aww remember when u came and played ding dong ditch with me and erica and we left you!

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wowimabigboy August 12 2004, 18:17:40 UTC
ya i rmember that, hahahah good times!!!!....... u still have my watch huh.lol. anyways tell me what u think of this poem ya

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chekoutmyassets August 14 2004, 04:34:25 UTC
its really good i thought it was a song? if you wrote that its really good mar k

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wowimabigboy August 14 2004, 21:39:28 UTC
ya i wrote it! =)

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nice poem krazienat August 12 2004, 18:44:29 UTC
but uhm yea ....nice pic to you hahahahha...i love men in briefs.lol.........i stopped by and you are a pretty funny guy..ttyl

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Re: nice poem wowimabigboy August 12 2004, 19:10:04 UTC
ya well i love being in briefs

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one_way_street August 12 2004, 19:05:30 UTC
OH WHAT THE FUCK!!! its my fuckin down the street neighbor since.....fuckin forever! i didnt know you had one of this damn things....Whats up mark its me ERIC Rivera,foo!! Its been a while since ive seen yer ass hit me up sometime. peace man

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wowimabigboy August 12 2004, 19:09:40 UTC
my nizzi!!!!!!!!! damn son...... we need to go to sum more parties and crash them!

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