my honest opinionsumwut_tangibleAugust 12 2004, 18:29:35 UTC
well it's better than anyting I could probably write, it's good, but I read your poems on earlier entries and I like the first two you wrote ALOT better. those two are really good. this poem has a lot of cliche phrases in it where as the other two did not.
but overall, good job.
and I like the whole "zach and kelly" thing, because it's saved by the bell and that show is only the greatest.
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your background has to be the funniest thing I've seen today, and quite possibly this whole week.
that's great.
that's cool that you can write poems and be brave enough to share them with everyone.
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it's good,
but I read your poems on earlier entries and I like the first two you wrote ALOT better.
those two are really good.
this poem has a lot of cliche phrases in it where as the other two did not.
but overall, good job.
and I like the whole "zach and kelly" thing, because it's saved by the bell and that show is only the greatest.
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