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writeontarget

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Mar 28, 2006 16:49

Fandom: Supernatural
Pairing: John Winchester x Mary Winchester
Theme set: Epsilon
Rating: PG
Notes: For 1sentence.

( Mary clips ads for practical vehicles that she’ll never get the chance to drive )

supernatural, john winchester, mary winchester

Comments 23

bodgei March 29 2006, 02:51:56 UTC

50 made me cry...

kissedbythegods March 30 2006, 19:18:27 UTC

Oh no! I'm sorry. I hope it was the good kind of crying!

bodgei March 30 2006, 23:47:31 UTC

yeah, it was.

pixel_0 March 29 2006, 02:57:45 UTC

There really needs to be more John/Mary out there, so this one was a welcomed addition to my small collection. I like how it tells the story of John and Mary, how they meet, how life tries to separate them with the war, and yet how they still stay together. I've seen a lot of these grouping from 1sentence that don't always make sense, but these are all very good.

These two are my favorites: "She laughs like a fool as she runs down the moonlit beach, John close in pursuit and threatening to put sand in her underwear as soon as he catches up." (Fool #21) and "The power goes out with the first storm of the season the night that Mary goes into labor, and John wonders if this isn’t another one of god’s little jokes." (Power #41). Lovely job on all.

kissedbythegods March 30 2006, 19:22:43 UTC

I was a little bit stupid in that I didn't fully read the rules when I started, and you're allowed to change the word order - which I did not do - and that fact I missed it made creating a logical story that much more difficult. I'm glad that you think it worked anyhow, though!

Thank you for pointing out your favourites - it's always so interesting to see what speaks to other people.

dragonsinger March 29 2006, 03:32:20 UTC

What a fantastic collection of sentences. I love how you take us through John and Mary's love story. Excellent!

kissedbythegods March 30 2006, 19:23:00 UTC

Thank you very much!

sugar_bumbee March 29 2006, 04:14:02 UTC

oh god... that last one... whoa. Don't mind me, I'll be over their sobbing my heart out.

In other words, FANTASTIC. Sweet and poignant and just real

kissedbythegods March 30 2006, 19:24:58 UTC

Thank you so much, and I'm sorry that it made you cry! (but only moderately! sometimes it's a good thing, right?)

deannaz March 29 2006, 08:46:56 UTC

The whole poem is gorgeous, but the ending stanza rocked the house:

John doesn’t believe in god, but he believes in Mary’s freckles across Dean’s cheeks and nose.

Lovely!! Thank you. :)

kissedbythegods March 30 2006, 19:27:09 UTC

No, thank you! I really appreciate that you took the time to comment, and with such sweet words.