Joss100 Challenge: Ficlet # 19 - Diamonds

Dec 09, 2005 09:49

Nineteen of these suckers done now - woo-hoo. The first 18 can be found here: Big Damn Prompt Table #2They run in order from 1 - 16, deviate to prompt 72, and then back to prompt 17 ( Read more... )

joss100, firefly, mal/river

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goodisrelative December 9 2005, 15:21:18 UTC
Excellent. I like how you have Mal coming to accept River slowly... a complete acceptence right away would never work... this is perfect.

And I love the Greek tragedies references! :) After having studyed the dead language from hell for 4 years in High School, I still find the myths interesting. :)

And I got my dvd's of the TV show in the mail yesterday so hopefully soon I will get time to watch all the eps!!

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noirreigne December 9 2005, 15:27:26 UTC
Her brand ‘a crazy and his brand ‘a crazy weren’t all that distant from each other.

I really love that line. You have captured Mal and River perfectly.

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houses7177 December 9 2005, 15:44:19 UTC
Wonderful. I love this slow evolution [though I think I missed a few of these, will have to go back and read], and it makes their evolving relationship more feasible. The image of her as a cracked diamond suites her well, really emphasizes how precious he thinks she is. Nice.

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out_of_range04 December 10 2005, 06:17:55 UTC
Love these ficlets. So well done, such an amazing dynamic between Mal and River. Bring us what you can when you can. Looking forward to January 4!!!

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paperdollgirl December 10 2005, 19:35:56 UTC
I just discovered your ficlets and you made me a Mal/River shipper. Your stories are so amazing. Thank you so much for sharing them with us. :)

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