Joss100 Challenge: Ficlet # 23 - Full

[writwritewrote]

Okay - I’m motivated the last few days. How exciting for me! Anyway, here is number 23 of 100, so I’m almost a quarter to my goal. *cringes*

As always, the rest of these can be found here: Big Damn Prompt Table #2 And run in order until the end of 16 - where it then deviates to number 72 and back

Comments

[ninamazing]

Oh my God love.

Extra-special points for use of "dream-sand" and the thing about Mal's arm and him wondering what it would be like and Zoe's euphemism of "sleep well." SO good. I hadn't yet seen a good Zoe-deals-with-Mal/River story ... UNTIL YOU. :D

One copyeditorlike thing: I think "woolly" should have two Ls.

You just keep up this motivation thing. You get better and better with each one of these. <3333

[gwenfrewi72]

I sit back once again feeling like I've just been served a gourmet meal, all due to the fact that you have an amazing writing style and set such the right tone with Mal and River that is just so Shiny!

I am an avid fan of yours and love the Firefly stuff you've written.

[obsidianagirl]

Unfortunately there is nothing new under the sun that I can say to express how wonderful I found this section!

Words do come to mind...like...

Awesome! Great! Touching and Sweet!

Thanks
Sid

[ann_mcn]

*sniff* That was so lovely! And Zoe, oh the ache for her. And she's glad he looks rested -- that is generosity.

[jazzfic]

Aw, I think this is the best one yet. There was something so perfect about this moment...really beautiful. And *fantastic* Zoe.