Really Bad Haiku

Dec 08, 2005 21:27

Really Bad Haiku,
with Wynn Martin

If it's freezing out,
and you go, you know... outside...
...you can freeze. The End.


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wynnwhy December 9 2005, 04:01:18 UTC
*chuckle* Well, in another context, I do think it's gorgeous and inspiring, though I meant for it to be sappily cheesy, here. ;-)

It is, though, a picture that I took myself when it snowed here in Houston on Christmas day last year, for the first time in recorded history. You have to imagine that the granual precipitation seems snow-like to Houstonians. (Actually, I think it just got more granular like that after some time.)

Amazingly, it had grown so warm in the preceding days that this plant, on my back porch, decided it was time to bloom, and suddenly it snowed; an unlikely, possibly gorgeous, maybe inspirational confluence of circumstance.

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lostbudha December 9 2005, 20:25:53 UTC
Cheesy Silly Wynn
Haiku style is wasted on
crap like this. High Five.

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wynnwhy December 10 2005, 06:05:59 UTC
lol! *grin* Thank you for the high five. :) Haiku is primed for slightly mischievous and silly humor like mine; it's an abuse of the style, but I don't think it's a waste, do you? ;-)

I'd like to see if I can make this a recurring feature of my journal... perhaps it will encourage me to update more often.

Very happy to see you commenting here; yay!

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