I feel badly that the close friend who unwittingly inspired the story previously posted here was uncomfortable therewith, so I have removed it per his request. My few great friends mean the world to me.
That was so raunchy I think Anne Rice would grow moist reading it. (pause) eww Anne Rice moist.... Besides the innocent and yet slightly disturbing allusions in the delivery boy's discription your uniquelywynnwit shines through making this an all in all ummm "pleasure" to read. (don't take that last part the wrong way i really do think it is good). I also like how you have characterized (sp?) the delivery boy as wit-less by not even spelling come with a "u". hmm I would write more but I always feel I don't get my point across with text. Anywho happy holidays and all that jazz.
lol! I'm glad someone laughed. I feel badly that the friend of mine who inspired the story, merely by taking a food delivery job, is unhappy about the entry, so I'm going to delete or replace it... and it makes me feel a little better to know that it was also enjoyed in some fashion at the same time.
I was very happy with small bits of it, all of them literary and none of them related to the characters or story. "Ring!" went the doorbell. ;-) I stared into his eyes, but couldn't see very far because it was really dark inside them...
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I was very happy with small bits of it, all of them literary and none of them related to the characters or story. "Ring!" went the doorbell. ;-) I stared into his eyes, but couldn't see very far because it was really dark inside them...
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