Submission #32 -- Volantis, "Lady Sumeragi is Dying"

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Title: Lady Sumeragi is Dying
User ID: Volantis
Rating: PG
Characters: Lady Sumeragi.
Warnings: Angst
Summary: Tea ceremony and harsh truths.

Comments

[thenakedcat]

Very beautiful description of the eternal stasis all the characters are locked in! You've got a solid idea of how to structure a fic, but I would recommend that you find a good beta reader (if you don't already have one), as the numerous typos interrupted the flow of the story.

[japanimecrazed]

This was a wonderful look at these characters. I particularly enjoyed Lady Sumeragi and Subaru's conversation.

[rose_erato]

I enjoyed the way this fic was written and the way Lady Sumeragi realized Subaru's insanity was beautifully done.

[uminohikari]

This was a really interesting idea! The fic flowed really well. The only thing that threw me out of the fic were the grammatical errors. ^^; Sometimes, I couldn't quite get what you meant..

[periergeia]

Very accurate analysis of the characters. I agree with the other posters, but then again, a lot of the entries (even the great ones) seem to need beta-ing. Good job overall.