Fic: Here Comes My Girl

[x_avecia_x]

Title: Here Comes My Girl
Author: x_avecia_x
Rating: NC-17
Warning: A few sweary words, a little smut but nothing too graphic :)
Word Count: 6,971
Disclaimer: I do not own Community - although I would totally marry Dan Harmon then claim half in our (inevitable) divorce settlement - that is unless he concedes to my end game Jeff/Annie demands. If you recognize any

Comments

[rachyins]

Wow, what can I say that was a great read. I got completely lost in the story it felt so real.

[x_avecia_x]

Thank you so much.

And you just know that I want to marry your icon!x

[rachyins]

Thanks, I do love me a bit of fr. ted. Think I might have to get an icon of each of them to use depending on my mood.

[x_avecia_x]

you would win all the awards if you did :)

[na_thalia]

Yay! I forgot to tell you how delightful it was to see you back writing again ;->

I have to admit, that story was harder to read because of the idea that Jeff was a widower. I mean, I'll cop to that fact that socialization has left me with the idea of 'romance' and happily ever after being the heteronormative nuclear family but I've seen and learned enough to know better - but Jeff as a widower is... That's hard. I feel like an unexpected death of a spouse would never really have closure.

Sheesh. Emotional suckerpunch much?

... So any word on the next part of It Was The Smartest Thing I Ever Did, Because Now You're Here?

[x_avecia_x]

Thank you, and I'm sorry this was so difficult to read (and I just noticed that apart from the content, LJ messed up my formatting smh)

And yeah, Jeff as a widower is really so not an easy thing to write (the idea of him disappearing and marrying some OC that came up with is not exactly the most believable of plots). I just hope I managed to keep it somewhat in character for how I think Jeff would react in that situation. I wouldn't expect Jeff ever to get closure after the sudden death of his wife but I reckon after four years he'd be in a position where his kid is a proper little person, not a baby and that he would feel ready to get on with his life. But alas, maybe that wouldn't be the case :( Thanks for reading anyways.

And yes, It Was The Smartest Thing I Ever Did will be updated tonight :)

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[nyclove3]

[x_avecia_x]

Hey, I'm glad you were able to read this even though it's quite hard to swallow (it amazes me that more people found Jeff as a widower harder to stomach than my fic where Annie is a total crack ho, but in a way where it makes me giggle to myself!)

My other multi-chapter will be updated tonight and the fic Your Mother Loves You will be updated in the next couple of weeks :)

Thanks again for reading. I adore your writing so it makes me happy when I see you commenting x x

[nyclove3]

[x_avecia_x]

*hugs*

[ndnickerson]

Great story. I love the idea of stealth hide and seek, and their getting back together felt totally realistic - and super hot. Loved it. :)

[x_avecia_x]

Well thank you. I really appreciate you taking the time to leave me a comment. It's a really out there idea but one I had to just go with regardless of whether everyone liked it or not, yet I'm so glad you did :)

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[classicfreak]

Oh to be a less emotional person. I didn't know weather to cry, smile, giggle or pass out from the cuteness (and lack of sleep)
Abed and Troy as doting uncles, a thousand times yes.
Sneaky, smirky, sarcastic 4 year old from the loins of our favorite smirky sarcastic group member? Nooo.
Ave, so perfect it physically hurts!

[x_avecia_x]

You made me cry you biatch!

[classicfreak]

Awwe yeah, turning on the water works, just call me Troy the plumber wonder boy.
and if you write an Annie POV I will read it with no hesitation. Plus, you're giving us hope of more Sophie.
Actually, can we make Sophie canon and have more stories with her in them? Like troy/abed/sophie the three musketeers, Ben x sophie friendship/cruise ship, etc.
Oh god, Britta has to be the biggest Ben x Sophie shipper "You're more progressive then your father, I'm so proud of you."
And Jeff and Sophie (who undoubtedly inherited his keen lawyer skills) facing off on dates and the importance of doing well and finishing school/being honest and other everyday problems.
AND WHAT IF ANNIE AND JEFF HAD A CHILD? HOW WOULD SOPHIE FEEL? Would she be all "I'm your big sister and I will kick anyone that makes you sad." Or "am I not enough?"
HOW DO I HAVE ALL THESE FEELS ABOUT A FICTIONAL CHARACTER?
WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME?

[x_avecia_x]

You do know Troy's my favourite, right? :)

I love those other ideas, not sure I am any good at writing Troy or Abed but I might put this into a small series, maybe 3 or 4 parts showing those kind of scenes, no promises though!

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