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The Crane Wife: Chapter 1 of 7

Nov 04, 2009 22:38

Title: The Crane Wife
Chapter: One:Seven
Author: x_losRating: R ( Read more... )

the crane wife, five/master, i crack naturally, fanfiction

Comments 45

tambores November 5 2009, 23:06:40 UTC

Well, Slave fic is really REALLY REALLY not my thing, and it still isn't. Nonetheless, I love this :) It's impressively well written and very amusing.

Can't wait for the next chapters!

x_los November 6 2009, 00:03:28 UTC

Aw, thanks, v. nice of you to say. :)

skipthedemon November 6 2009, 01:08:40 UTC

Yet another 'really not into slave fic' person here. But I do like arranged marriage stories, that seems odd now that I think about it, I'll have to pick apart why that is later. I am also sucked in.

Why do I think this Master wouldn't know what a sex slave was, if it hit him in the face? Hilarious. I'm envisioning the Doctor doing hot things with his brain the laboratory later, and the Master going....oh. I want sex with my slave. Strange.

x_los November 6 2009, 02:21:48 UTC

I am going to like, make y'all an icon. "I'm not really into slave fic, buuuut--" And arranged marriage fic is the comfier, more socially-acceptable sex-slavery fic? It does put the emphasis more on a romantic than sexual relationship...

I like that he doesn't even think 'and also I could tap that, just as a side dish.' Awh.

evilawyer November 6 2009, 04:22:56 UTC

Ooh! New fic! And off to an intriguing start. I might wait, however, until it's all posted --- I'm finding I have a less hard time waiting until WIPs are done and up to read them.

x_los November 6 2009, 06:46:24 UTC

Oh, you have more self control than I do, I HAVE TO read everything as it comes out. I was the kid who wouldn't go to bed b/c she suspected Stuff Happened whilst she slept and couldn't bear to be out of the loop.

evilawyer November 6 2009, 17:41:18 UTC

I was the kid who wouldn't go to bed b/c she suspected Stuff Happened whilst she slept and couldn't bear to be out of the loop.

Ah, but you were right! So that's okay, then.

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x_losfic December 4 2009, 19:21:07 UTC

*sigh* You know they never /start out/ as epic. Fucking fics.

And I like your way of very aptly summing up the essence of a story in a way it might not quite have occurred to me!

brokenangelred May 21 2010, 05:48:47 UTC

Just about died laughing at 'a small wagon.'

I love how you write five, he is just so...huffy.

x_losfic May 24 2010, 13:13:33 UTC

Glad you were amused! And oh, I do love my huffy, uncomfortable five. <3

brokenangelred May 25 2010, 03:25:06 UTC

I haven't had a chance to comment on the other chapters, as I've been reading them on my mobile but this whole story is just fantastic. I stayed up until 2:30 last night reading it. Work was hell today but it was completely worth it.

x_losfic May 27 2010, 00:33:23 UTC

Awwwh, thanks so much! I honestly think this is my favorite/the best fic-thing I've done, and I like comments on it best of all. <3 Glad you liked!