Migraine Coma chapter 9: luciD Dreams 0.2

[keyllastic]

Title: Migraine Coma: "luciD Dreams 0.2"
Chapter: #9/#?
Author: rookie_cherii
Band/Pairing: Chiyu x Takeru (SuG)
Rating: PG
Warnings: none.
Summary: Chiyu has found a new path to follow and his life seems to be back on track. Then, an unexpected incident pulls him into the nights of Tokyo, and back to the blackest eyes of the boy he thought had forgotten about

Comments

[misscool12345]

HAH. SPOT.

[keyllastic]

Hah, my codes failed? w
Sorry for the italic post, that wasn't supposed to happen.

[misscool12345]

... Watcha mean? Your codes failed? *is confused*

[keyllastic]

The thing is it wasn't supposed to be in italic, I forgot to close the italic tag. I write the whole thing with the html on notepad, and occasionally forget to end the codes, lol. :'c

[misscool12345]

........................

I suspect Shinpei is leaving the notes... but then again it could be anybody.

Poor Takeru. I wouldn't ever be able to deal with all the weight he has on his back. Same with Chiyu. I like how this is all in italics. I dont know why... I just think writing in italics makes it prettier. <-- random comment

[keyllastic]

Personally, I prefer to not have the endings figured till the end when I read something, and especially with human drama and stuff that deals with emotions and relationships, I find it sort of... crucial, because real life emotions aren't simple, either. So I'm happy someone finds the initial confusion a good thing xD

Like I said the italics thing was a mistake, but maybe I should change the layout code so that the font was italic, and then make all the outstanding stuff non-italic. lol

Ah, Finnish is actually my first language, but I've been learning English for the majority of my life and worked mostly in English-speaking communities, so half the time these days I think it's stronger than my mother tongue...... xDDDD;; Thanks, though!

I'm trying to get the next chapter ready soon! It might not explode with plot, but hopefully it'll add to the whole mystery c:

[misscool12345]

I like it when books or movies have a big BANG at the end. Like a 'I totally didn't see that coming' sort of thing. Any movie or book with an enexpected ending always ends up being my favorite.

Or books about phsychiatric stuff, I wanna be a phsychiatrist when I'm older. 8D

Do what you will with the italics, as long as you write I will be happy. XD

Wow. English is my native language, I also know a bit of french, but that doesnt count because i learn it in school. XD

Don't rush yourself. If you to finish everything to quickly, it wont be done as well as you want *knows from experiance...*. As long as you update, everyone will be happy.

[misscool12345]

Lolol. Forgot to sign in. Whatever I just said... it was meant to be posted by me on my account. XD

... If you reply, reply to this cuz I wont get the notification otherwise.

[super_nyaaa]

oh oh oh! the text/mail at the beginning! i saw it >:D

i somehow cannot see the connection between these chapters and lucid dreaming :/ but, now i'm also some psycho that sees lucid dreaming as a more or less normal thing so maybe that's where i lost the point XD

i think Shinpei's the one leaving all the notes... it just seems to fit in... but i guess i'm going to read this story all over again since i've forgotten some here and there, and therefore can't think clearly...

also i really seem to like Hazuki's relationship with Takeru... like caring without caring too much... or caring without Takeru knowing he cares too much (:

"So you know how he gets when shit hits the fan" AHAHAHHAHAHA i've never heard someone saying it like that before but that seriously made my day XD funniest way to put it ever XD

And, Shinpei hurting anybody? i really can't imagine that small guy hurting anybody... like it's him who's small XD though i think you've given him an interesting personality :)

i look forward for more :D

[keyllastic]

The "lucid dreaming" title relates to the fact that both Takeru and Chiyu wish, in their own ways, that the situation wasn't real while they know it's not, so it's sort of a counter-dreaming effect, as in, they're not dreaming, but rather wishing they were, realizing it's not a dream while lucid dreaming would have one realize they are having a dream. Wow, complicated explanation lol. In any case though the chapter titles are a little loose in concept - Chiyu isn't afraid of falling asleep but simply unable to as sleeping would just bring back all the memories, and "hypnagogia" would rather refer to the magical morning hours during which Takeru and Hazuki's conversation takes place than the actual waking up/falling asleep effect. :) I hope that explains it a little

[funkyfreshdays7]

asdfghjklöäõ I can't believe this omfgnfjkmdnvkdlfm I just thought that after a few good weeks (or months), it's time to check out my LJ again...so I came here straight away...and you have posted so many new chapters DVJKDKMDKMDLKMDLDFM,DKNM,VSNVF I don't have time right now to read all o' them, but I'll come back later and spend the rest of my day behind the computer screen, I promise! I think I can't post enough comments or find enough words to describe how much I enjoy this fanfic. It's so much better than many books out there, and my eagerness and impatience when I'm waiting for the next chapter can be compared to that of the most hardcore HP and Twilight fans. You are very talented, smart and witty. I wish I could be a bit liek you when I'm older. You know so much about so many things, your writing is eloquent and enchanting (even though it isn't in your first language) This story is amazing. I love the way you portray different humans and their emotions, it's a lot like Haruki Murakami :D The story might be confusing and

[keyllastic]

I'm pretty much speechless, thank you so much ♥ I promise not to let you down, will keep writing! Omg, thank you. ><;;

[funkyfreshdays7]

I was just wondering if there's any chance of you continuing to write this fanfic :) I think I don't need to say how much I've enjoyed it, but I don't mean to put any pressure on you or make you feel bad or anything, and I'm sorry if there's been a lot going on in your life and you simply haven't had the time or the will to write more of this great story. I simply like it so much I haven't forgotten about it and I've kept checking back here to see if it's been updated. I hope you do find the time to keep the fic going, and even if you don't, it's OK, as it has been absolutely wonderful this far and I wish you all the best.

[keyllastic]

Hey! I'm kind of torn between what should I reply, really. I keep thinking back to this story and how I need to finish it, but on the other hand I'm kind of out of the fandom and working on a million other things. I really want to finish the story, it's been with me for so long (years, gods!) and I know lots of people are expecting for me to finish... But I sort of feel if I will write it till the end, I'd like to revamp the whole story from the beginning, and that'd technically mean writing a whole new story. :( So I'm sorry to tell you for now it's kind of in ice until I find the mind and time to write it. I'm really happy that so many people have enjoyed it, though, considering in what a whim did I start writing it and how many things have changed during the time I've worked on it.
If you're interested in reading anything else I've put together, though, I've been posting a k-fandom story on my personal blog (one that I'm done writing so it'll come to an end for sure).

[druwidi]

When will you continue with this? 8)

I'm dying to read more D:
Do you have non-inspiration for this one eh? :'D
Have the Koreans totally swept you away >D

I understand though 8D

[keyllastic]

Right now I'm being swept away by a massive load of Hwan that I came across hur hur hur

I've got stuff to write, that's no problem though~

[druwidi]

Har har har I knew it!!!

You are so excused :D

[keyllastic]

Did you get my MMS? w