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On Unstable Ground

Mar 15, 2010 16:20

Title: On Unstable Ground
Author: moi
Pairing: JongKey
Genre: Angst, Future!Fic
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: SME owns pretty boys and I own words. Talk about unfairness.
Summary: "Couldn't find any store open, I had to walk five blocks, can you imagine that?" is all Jonghyun gets to say, mouth numb and cheeks cold, before his hands linger on the door and ( Read more... )

!fic, ♥jongkey

Comments 37

harkk March 15 2010, 15:22:27 UTC

i want to leave a comment but idk what to say. D:

i like this. /nods.
i suck at commenting

x_saru_x March 15 2010, 16:57:19 UTC

I'm really really glad you do ♥

don't mind it, I secretly suck at replying, too

chyennified March 15 2010, 15:23:35 UTC

so alike to those precious babies group's names.
this is so shiny, so crystal and beautiful!
everything was described greatly. ^^

x_saru_x March 15 2010, 16:58:05 UTC

Thank you so much! ;~;

flyintoheaven March 15 2010, 15:57:17 UTC

"They don't sleep together, but they wake up on the same side of the bed."

that was amazing. everything about this story was amazing. ♥

x_saru_x March 15 2010, 16:58:56 UTC

/shaking
Thank you! ♥

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x_saru_x March 15 2010, 17:02:33 UTC

Haha angst exists to make us suffer, but we love it either way. So yeah, I guess there's a rather big amount of sadists XD

Thank you for reading :3

shinee_xoxo March 15 2010, 19:52:24 UTC

this seems so strikingly in character to me, i mean i know its supposed to be some years in the future, and i cant entirely judge, but it just seems to be the thing that they would do; key forgiving jonghyun but not really, and jjong just not being able to say what he needs to...this was intense

x_saru_x March 16 2010, 16:00:54 UTC

Very glad you think so! I am/was pretty worried over how realistic and believable this one is, so this is such a relief ♥

Thank you for reading!