On Unstable Ground

Mar 15, 2010 16:20

Title: On Unstable Ground
Author: moi
Pairing: JongKey
Genre: Angst, Future!Fic
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: SME owns pretty boys and I own words. Talk about unfairness.
Summary: "Couldn't find any store open, I had to walk five blocks, can you imagine that?" is all Jonghyun gets to say, mouth numb and cheeks cold, before his hands linger on the door and ( Read more... )

!fic, ♥jongkey

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salted_taiyaki March 16 2010, 00:19:17 UTC
ooc my butt, this was brilliant *___*
honestly I just really loved it lskdf there are too many things for me to point out, aha. the obvious love that goes on between them (with only one second passing before he says "I think I do") and at the same time, the shit jonghyun's caused
i mean idk i find affairs like these to be oddly romantic, that the other one is just out of "obligation" and lksjf oh kibum ♥ i find the image of him smoking to be quite in character, and it just...seemed to fit the whole relationship between them.

i also loved the last line it lksjdf guh, is this really going to be a future fic? can't wait ♥

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x_saru_x March 16 2010, 16:06:12 UTC
sdfkjsd everything you pointed out♥♥♥
And I'm really not a fan of smoking, but once the idea of Key smoking came to mind, I couldn't get rid of it. So glad you enjoyed it ;~;

Oh and the 'future!fic' part only has to do with the fic taking place somewhere in the future D:

Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment :')

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salted_taiyaki March 16 2010, 19:28:32 UTC
♥ i love taking the time and picking out stuff to comment on, it's a really weird hobby of mine aha
I really despise smoking actually, I just think it's a disgusting habit, but when I imagine Key it's like lksjdf idk he's an exception to everything really

kjsf oh. ohhh. .../cry
well it was nice while it lasted ;___;
you're so very welcome ♥

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x_saru_x March 16 2010, 19:49:19 UTC
And reading all that is lovely ;~;
Yes, ikr! He's proven to me before that things I'll hate on anyone else, I'll love on him @_@ Even smoking, for crying out loud.

Haha I'm sorry, but there will be more fanfics in general; that's good, yes? XD

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mrskimkey March 16 2010, 05:40:04 UTC
omo ~~ this was so beautiful dear ! <33 i heart it to bits. how the freak do you write so well ? XD hehe ,seriously gonna re read it 5 times before i get enough <33

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x_saru_x March 16 2010, 16:07:09 UTC
Eeek, so glad!

Thank you♥

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x_saru_x March 16 2010, 16:08:17 UTC
I'm really happy to hear that :3

Thank you for reading!

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papersanguine March 19 2010, 03:56:24 UTC
Oh wow that was amazing!

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x_saru_x March 19 2010, 14:35:26 UTC
Thank you! ♥

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kyaa_kawaii March 20 2010, 13:56:24 UTC
I don't have a mirror near me, but I'm pretty sure I look something like this: ;~; or perhaps TT__TT

WHAT HAPPENED TO THE SPARKLY, JOYFUL, GAY LOVE? ;~;

You know, I seriously was in denial about angst before I met you. Then you just started hitting me in my face about it until I couldn't ignore it anymore.
This is so... so *language fail* lovely? Terrific? idk. But it hurts just right. ♥ I love the happy stories you write, of course, because happiness is something precious, but I love the serious tone in your angst fics and the way it's all like a slowly flowing river. (Not that I have ever read a crack!angst fic but you know what I mean. I hope.)

okay, I seriously need to move or something. my head feels like cotton.

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x_saru_x March 20 2010, 14:29:15 UTC
IT EXISTS, JUST NOT HERE AND NOT AT ALL TIMES DDDDDDDDDD:

Here to serve *bows deeply*
Eeeek eeek you, you ;~; Thank you so much for your words T___T ♥

yes, you do that, we want you alive

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