Waiter, Check Please!; jaesu

[x_voracity]

Waiter, Check Please!
jaesu; 779 words
done for tvxqfic's prompt challenge: nobody loses all the time
summary: jaejoong is a waiter at a diner who develops a little crush.
not my best, and a little random. hope someone is able to enjoy anyway :x!

Comments

[dewberrie]

this is completely precious; i can totally picture jaejoong acting like this in real life ♥ adorable boys :3

[x_voracity]

dies. jaejoong is just all around flaily fail :)

[xiahtism]

ahhh this is cute!!
and lovely precious one.. ^^
haha

tbxxxx....

[x_voracity]

thank you :)))

[soft_daisy]

"Nice going. You're making my job easier."
haha, yunho... ♥
jaejoong--lols, you always write him into such fail. ^^ but it's undeniably cute. i love how yunho understands jaejoong so well. umm...junsu the genius? i also love how jaejoong has to make so many long, windy detours before getting to junsu, but junsu's directness gets him right to jaejoong (erm..haha, that probably doesn't make much sense).

anyways, missed your writing and adorable jaesu!fics. it's been so long since i've been here--sry. ): i hate to admit it, but i kind of miss your bittersweet!fics xD
thank you so much for writing and sharing! your writing always gives me such inspiration ♥

[x_voracity]

jaejoong is the ultimate loser, and i think the world needs to know that 8D but no, yeah, junsu's directness is totally what made the fail circle stop 8D

aww thank you :) ♥x43895 jaesu refuses to be anything but sickeningly sweet, bleghhhh

[su_milk_jun]

I agree Jaejoong is ultimate loser
please write more about the ultimate loser ;D

[su_milk_jun]

oooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhh cute cute cute cute XD I love jaejoong in this

[x_voracity]

:D thank you!

[elvenknight16]

Lol I loved reading this ♥ ♥

[x_voracity]

ahhhh thank you :))) i had almost forgotten i had writtent his and i'm really glad you liked it enough to comment.