Be my light; Hardycest [One shot]

[xdreamthextreme]

Title: Be my light.
Author: xdreamthextreme 
Pairing: Matt Hardy/Jeff Hardy
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: Don't own, sadly.
Author's Notes: Yay! Done! Finally! This is my first sex scene ever, be gentle please! D: But yea. Hardycest! Whoot! Don't click if you don't like it. Goddamn flammers. :P

Comments

[athna]

Okay that's first time i read Matt's and Jeff fiction cuz well they are brothers *shrugged*

BUT i loved it SOOOO much , Some of the sentence really were touchy :
"Matt Placed a soft sorry kiss on the back of Jeff's head the buried his face in his neck."

Awww that was so sad , Really poor Matt .

And the ending was so sad , But i was confuse, did they or didn't they have sex? what was the dream part exactly?^^

[snapsnapsabby]

aw thanks hun! (:
The whole thing was a dream. Poor Matty wants Jeff but he no can has :P ):

[kaotic_princez]

I love how you used Jeff's "sex in a tree" story to write this. I want that clip from "confidential" sooo bad. At least I am almost positive that it was from a episode of "confiential" lol, anyway reall GREAT fic I loved reading it.

[616poisongirl]

wow, this was really awesome!!!

Poor Matty :(

[em25]

I enjoyed this so much. Everyone knows Hardyz slash is my thing, and I love getting to read some I didn't have to write myself!

The sex scene went very well, I thought, and I really felt for Matt at the end. I love happy endings as much as the next girl, but sometimes bittersweet stories can be much more poignant.

Two thumbs up, and I hope you continue to write Hardyz slash in the future!

[rkowhore79]

so this was really awesome. i loved how it turned into a dream at the end (the hardy!cest that i wrote last month was soooo supposed to turn out to be all a dream, too. but i went in a diff direction. lol) and i loved how beth went bye bye;)
great job!