Smiles Part 4

Feb 15, 2009 12:54

It didn’t matter anymore. The Joker had done it. He’d found Crane sitting in a corn field, dressed him up as a scarecrow, and ripped him open. Dust and moldy hay flew everywhere in his head and he couldn’t discern any smell other than blood. It was still on his tongue reminding him what had just happened.

Joker, for his part, couldn’t have been ( Read more... )

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robin_92 February 15 2009, 21:17:28 UTC
that last line is the GREATEST I love it and I'm completely looking forward to seeing if you carry this anywhere else :D

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depressed90 February 15 2009, 21:41:00 UTC
Thanks! It's strange cause a lot of people seem to like that line and I just thought I kinda stuck it there. Well, guess my instincts are good for something!

And the sequel is delicious!

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robin_92 February 16 2009, 17:29:12 UTC
you already wrote the sequel?!

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depressed90 February 16 2009, 22:34:53 UTC
Oh no, I wrote the first chapter, but I'm almost done with the second. But this story could go on forever since it will be more character development and hot smex rather than building plot like Smiles.

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robin_92 February 23 2009, 18:11:13 UTC
:\ you almost say that like it's a bad thing xD

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collectively February 17 2009, 01:42:15 UTC
I've enjoyed this! Man, I am such a sucker for the two of them. XD I really like how they're fucking with eachother's minds. Looking forward to the sequel!

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makeyoubelievex February 17 2009, 18:58:51 UTC
I'm sad it's over. But after reading the comments looking forward to the smex. :D Who needs character development when there is smex? You did that here! :p

To a serious review, I love the playing with people's heads, I love to do that in stories and here is was very convincing. Picking at the fine strings of sanity, you do it well.

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frankensteinn March 24 2009, 11:20:07 UTC
I lovedddd thissss.

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