okay. here is my 'sonnet' that i wrote.
she said we didnt have to watch meter or
count syllables and that we could slant
rhyme but we workshopped my poem in
class (lucky me) and she said that while
it was very vivid (?) the ending was weak
and the rhymes are too slanty for my
poem to count as a sonnet.
any comments for me??
His brick red
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