Comments | xhaleslowly: New Fic: Bottom Boy Redux: B/J NC-17

xhaleslowly

New Fic: Bottom Boy Redux: B/J NC-17

Nov 01, 2005 18:02

Jesus, you guys. Just... I mean, *damn* :) I don't even know what to say, except just to repeat my same old refrain of THANK YOU!! You guys just inspire me, and make it so easy for me to write, to wanna do this. Seriously.

So... as promised, here's fic!

Any of you out there remember a fic I wrote a long time ago (March '03!!!) called Bottom Boy ( Read more... )

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susanderavish November 2 2005, 02:17:35 UTC

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xhaleslowly November 2 2005, 06:44:29 UTC

LOL!

Well, okay then :P

anonymous November 2 2005, 02:24:16 UTC

REMEMBER it??????? It's on my hard drive....it's one of my favourite QAF fics of all time. And I can hardly wait to read this one!!!!!!!!

xhaleslowly November 2 2005, 06:45:47 UTC

it's one of my favourite QAF fics of all time

Oh geez, thanks for that :) It was just a little porny thing I wrote before and I really wanted to write it again from a different perspective. Hope you enjoyed it!

shadownyc November 2 2005, 02:26:25 UTC

I was thrilled to see a new fic. from you! This was so HOT and yet incredibly beautiful and tender with its expression of emotion. The final few are so lovely that they're poetic. Thanks for treating us to your wonderful return in such fantastic style! :D

xhaleslowly November 2 2005, 06:47:31 UTC

Thanks so much for this - it was something I started a while ago, but finally got... um... "inspired" to finish up :P Glad you enjoyed it! Hopefully will have another fic along soon-ish :)

damietta November 2 2005, 02:26:49 UTC

"Since you were 17, that's all you've ever wanted, needed, had to have. He's always known it. You don't know what it is about you, or your body that makes you need him inside you. What it is about you that makes you a bottom boy."

Man. This is very well done (I didn't realize I was holding my breath until the end). The above quote though really spoke to me.

The attraction of Brian and Justin first was physical, then emotional. That should never have waned in the series. They were a ballet together and that chemistry should have carried them through a lot of things. (I hope I'm making sense.)

And, one small point, I loved that Brian is obessive about brushing his teeth. Those little bits just humanize the lovely man even more.

Deb

xhaleslowly November 2 2005, 06:54:12 UTC

Deb - thanks so much for pulling out that part. And I agree with you so much about this:

The attraction of Brian and Justin first was physical, then emotional. That should never have waned in the series. They were a ballet together and that chemistry should have carried them through a lot of things.

You made perfect sense, I know exactly what you mean :)

And about the brushing teeth thing - I snuck a few things from the original into this updated version and that was one of them. I love details and always try to get a few in there - you're right, I think it does humanize the characters a little more.

Thanks again for the feedback!

tawny_7 November 2 2005, 02:59:57 UTC

Thank you for coming back!! I've missed your fics so much!

I loved this one...you write them so perfectly. I can feel the love between them.

Looking foward to more of your fics!

*hugs to Ethan*

xhaleslowly November 2 2005, 06:55:58 UTC

I can feel the love between them.

Ah, that's so great to hear. Thank you!! And thanks for the welcome back. Hopefully I'll have a couple more fics along soon :)