New Fic: First Time for Everything (3/10): B/J: NC-17

Nov 28, 2006 17:30

Hey guys... well, I really meant to have this out way earlier, but I hit a block and just had to put it down for a little bit. But I think it's all done now :)

As always, many thanks and hugs to paddies for the inspiration and gorgeous icon :X

Hope you enjoy!

First Time for Everything: Part 3 )

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lastglances November 29 2006, 01:34:43 UTC
thank you soooo much for posting this. i've been writing a paper all day (on greek sculpture, yay) and this is exactly what i needed. i was just discussing the dynamics of justin topping and this just added to my thoughts on it. excellent job. it was hot and frantic and oh so nice.

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xhaleslowly November 29 2006, 02:10:25 UTC
Yeah, this is definitely a lot different than greek sculpture! lol! Thanks so much for letting me know you liked it... much appreciated!

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beathen November 29 2006, 01:42:06 UTC
OMG YAY!! An update!

I love how Brian guides Justin through every step of the process with a sensuality that just makes me go all squishy. The description of Justin fucking the trick was so detailed, but hot, and you spend a good amount of time on the emotional aspect that the other part doesn't feel technical. Excellent job! :D

you think about fucking and being fucked at the same time and it makes you shiver at the thought.

Another time, you think.

Are you going to write this one too?!

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xhaleslowly November 29 2006, 02:15:30 UTC
The description of Justin fucking the trick was so detailed, but hot, and you spend a good amount of time on the emotional aspect that the other part doesn't feel technical.

Ah, thanks so much for that feedback - that's one thing I'm always concerned about when writing these little PWP pieces. It can sometimes be hard to strike the right balance between the physical and the emotional without going overboard on either one!

Are you going to write this one too?!

Well... I don't want to give *too* much away (as I know some people don't want to know what's next in the series), but if you check out Gio's complete request on her site, you'll get your answer :P

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moose74 November 29 2006, 01:44:44 UTC
Pefect timing! I really needed a super hot Ethan fic today.

Hot and wonderful, as usual! :D

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xhaleslowly November 29 2006, 02:18:25 UTC
Aw, thanks so much, sweetie :X

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shadownyc November 29 2006, 01:47:04 UTC
That was so HOT and so beautiful!

"Since I've fucked your pretty little ass about a hundred times."

I smiled right along with Justin knowing that Brian admitted this in front of his closest friends.

Great installment! :D

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xhaleslowly November 29 2006, 02:23:49 UTC
Thanks for picking up on that part! I have to admit that the hardest part of this fic was adding in the "emotional first time" (part of Gio's fic request) - but it's also been fun trying to think of little things like that.

So glad you enjoyed it :)

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sandstorm63 November 29 2006, 01:51:15 UTC
Wowowowowow. You're back, lol. Thanks for this. Is it me or are these fics just gettig hotter and hotter?????? ;)

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xhaleslowly November 29 2006, 02:25:35 UTC
LOL! Well, I don't know, sweetheart, you tell me :P

Thanks, as always, Andz :X :X :X

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