New Fic: First Time for Everything (3/10): B/J: NC-17

[xhaleslowly]

Hey guys... well, I really meant to have this out way earlier, but I hit a block and just had to put it down for a little bit. But I think it's all done now :)

As always, many thanks and hugs to paddies for the inspiration and gorgeous icon :X

Hope you enjoy!

Comments

[lunachickk]

OMGETHAN! That was amazing! Sorry, but I'm too *guh* to say much more.

I say this all the time but I love the way your writing makes me feel like I'm *in* the story. *guh*

[xhaleslowly]

I have to say that I think that *guh* is definitely an underused word, and I love it when someone uses it to refer to one of my stories :P lol!

Thanks so much for this, Lunie... and I love hearing that my writing makes you feel like you're in the story. That's such awesome feedback to get :)

[testdog65]

Yay, another part to this wonderful series! So hot to have Brian guiding Justin through the whole event. I really enjoyed this, yet again. Can’t come up with anything more coherent to say at the moment as my brain kinda melted. But, thanks, so much for posting!
~Ellen

[xhaleslowly]

Thanks for this, Ellen! That was part of the fic request, to have Brian there, guiding Justin through it. I didn't want him to be *too* intrusive to take away from Justin's experience, but I just wanted him there as a presence in the story, to continue in his role as "teacher", so to speak.

So glad you enjoyed it :)

[sorcha5]

YUM YUM YUM, this was super read Thanks!

[xhaleslowly]

Thanks, Sorcha! So glad you enjoyed it :)

[xhaleslowly]

Thanks so much, darlin' :P That's what I was aiming for ;)

[xie_xie_xie]

I made a little joke in my LJ a while ago that I was going to use this series to keep my heating bills down this winter, and what's very funny is that right now, my furnace is BROKEN and it's like, 40 degrees outside, and IT'S COME TRUE!

I am warm for the first time all day.

You write such a strong, fully realized S1 Justin. It's a rare and beautiful thing.

[xhaleslowly]

Well, I'm glad my writing is good for *something* practical! lol!

But seriously, thanks so much for this, Xie... and I can't tell you how much I appreciate the comments about S1 Justin. I've really come to love writing him in this series - it's been a shift as I've mostly written fics that focus on mid-S2 and onwards, but it's been a great change for me. I love the cockiness and naivete that he displayed in those early episodes, when everything was so new and different and he was eager to take it all in. It's been a lot of fun writing him from that perspective - I'm glad to hear you're enjoying it!

Thanks again for the feedback :)