New Fic: First Time for Everything (3/10): B/J: NC-17

[xhaleslowly]

Hey guys... well, I really meant to have this out way earlier, but I hit a block and just had to put it down for a little bit. But I think it's all done now :)

As always, many thanks and hugs to paddies for the inspiration and gorgeous icon :X

Hope you enjoy!

Comments

[luciblue]

Nobody does it better!

[xhaleslowly]

Thank you!!! :)

[damietta]

Ah, Justin getting Brian to admit (in front of "the friends") that they are having sex on a regular basis....good times!

I'm glad you worked through your wall..welcome back.

[xhaleslowly]

Thanks so much, Deb! And I'm glad you liked Brian's little "admission" :P The feedback is much appreciated :)

[xhaleslowly]

You are very good at showing Justin as a 17 year old without being too extreme.

Thanks so much for this... it's such great feedback to get :) I've been really enjoying writing 17-year-old Justin, but it's been important to me to make sure the "voice" is right. I'm so glad to hear it's been working for you :)

[sixfullerst]

Oh the joy coming home to find Part 3!!! Regarding that block, you just go ahead and take all the time you need if this is the final result. Love your Justin, you share his internal dialogue perfectly. Thank you!

[xhaleslowly]

Thanks so much for this encouragement :) I was initially hoping to work through the series fairly quickly, but... well, it just hasn't worked out that way. But I'm glad to hear that you don't mind waiting!

And thanks also for the comments about Justin's internal dialogue... that's such awesome feedback to get :)

[irishcaelan]

You trollop.

[xhaleslowly]

LOL! You *know* it, Cael :X