New Fic: First Time for Everything (5/10): B/J: NC-17

[xhaleslowly]

Happy Spring! The sun is shining and the weather is warming up and the days are getting longer. Perfect excuse for more porny stories :)

Much love to paddies for the new icon (especially since I know you've been very very busy!!!). And many thanks to everyone that's offered their feedback and encouragement. Hope you guys are continuing to enjoy the

Comments

[xhaleslowly]

lol! Thanks for that :P

[metafascinating]

OMG! I loved it!! So hot and also so sweet with the homework part. Can't wait to read more!

[xhaleslowly]

Thanks for this, Sherri! Much appreciated :) Hopefully the next part won't be tooooo far away...

[bodleian]

I've read it once and I will be rereading it soon. You are writing this '1st time' series so well - you can feel Justin's disappointment when he knows that there is a trick in the loft (even though he thinks that it is OK), then his tredipation as he joins in for his first threesome, his pleasure as he becomes a very willing participant and finally, when the trick leaves, his happiness as Brian starts to help him with his algebra. At the end, Justin sees a Brian that no one else sees and I think that this gives the greatest pleasure of all.
Of course, Justin will also be looking forward to any other sexual pleasures that Brian will introduce him to...
Write soon, please.

[xhaleslowly]

Thank you so much for this detailed feedback... I'm so glad to hear that you were able to capture all those emotions as you read through the fic. I really wanted to make sure the reader felt that yeah, Justin's anxious, but also that he's curious about the experience.

The great thing about Gio's "first time list" is that they're all acts that we never saw on screen, but we know *did* happen. So I kind of have a frame of reference, but also lots of room to play around ;) It's been great fun to write this series, and getting this kind of feedback totally makes me glad that I took it on (and encourages me to finish up the other five quickly!) :)

Thanks again for this - always appreciated!

[itsjustkristen]

What a lovely surpise to see a post from you!

I loved this, it was totally hot and then totally sweet with the homework helping.

Good to see you around! ♥

[xhaleslowly]

Thanks for this Kristen! And yes, I know my updates have been few and far between these days - I so appreciate you guys sticking around and being patient with me :)

Thanks again for this - hope to have the new part along a little quicker this time!

[xhaleslowly]

Thanks so much for this - and I'm glad you liked the end bit with the homework :P