Comments | xhaleslowly: New Fic: First Time for Everything (5/10): B/J: NC-17

xhaleslowly

New Fic: First Time for Everything (5/10): B/J: NC-17

Apr 10, 2007 18:16

Happy Spring! The sun is shining and the weather is warming up and the days are getting longer. Perfect excuse for more porny stories :)

Much love to paddies for the new icon (especially since I know you've been very very busy!!!). And many thanks to everyone that's offered their feedback and encouragement. Hope you guys are continuing to enjoy the ( Read more... )

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anonymous April 11 2007, 02:33:51 UTC

I discovered your fiction through Fansee and Chering, who have given you full credit for being their inspiration. I totally agree that you're a fuckin' great inspiration! (That's my Debbie impression - thank you very much.)

All your fiction is wonderfully evocative. Thanks for being in this community.

Much love, and write more...Suzanne

sevigny7 April 11 2007, 02:35:38 UTC

So sorry that read as anonymous! I'm not...

xhaleslowly April 12 2007, 04:01:47 UTC

Many thanks for this, Suzanne! And I'm very glad to be a part of this community - the support that I've received for my writing has been incredible and definitely has inspired *me* to continue :)

qafaddiction April 11 2007, 02:38:15 UTC

As always, the hotness of the story matches the fiery orange of your LJ... but would you think I was really strange if I said the sexiest thing about this one was Brian wanting to help Justin with his homework? And I mean that in a really, really good way. Brian doesn't do anything lightly, especially when it comes to helping others. To me, the offer was Brian's version of "cuddling" after sex. LOL Great job, Ethan. :)

xhaleslowly April 12 2007, 04:10:36 UTC

but would you think I was really strange if I said the sexiest thing about this one was Brian wanting to help Justin with his homework

Nope, not at all... and since I had a helluva time coming up with that ending, I'm *very* glad to hear you enjoyed it! lol!! It's been challenging, but interesting, trying to come up with the subtle first times for these fics. The homework idea came from a repeat viewing of 109, where Brian is helping Justin with his vocabulary - I thought it might be interesting to see the "first time" he ever offered Justin that kind of help :)

Thanks so much for the feedback, Heather - it's always good to hear from you!

PS - I've been considering redesigning my website and was going to nuke the orange, but your comment has made me rethink that! lol! ;)

tawny_7 April 11 2007, 02:43:50 UTC

Wow...as usual it was wonderful. I still love the way you write both Brian and Justin. It seems so them. I think you did great with the ending as well...let's us know Brian feels more for Justin than he outwardly shows.

I'm looking forward to the next installment of this!

You hav a great night/day...whichever it is where you live.

*hugs*

xhaleslowly April 12 2007, 04:12:33 UTC

It seems so them.

The most important thing for me when writing fic is to try and make sure I keep them in character, so that's just about the best feedback to get :)

Thanks very much for your comment, Tawny!

lunachickk April 11 2007, 02:49:32 UTC

OMG, that was hot!
And I completely LOVED the homework scene at the end!
You have such a wonderful grasp of tone of S1 in this series. So good.

xhaleslowly April 12 2007, 04:14:06 UTC

You have such a wonderful grasp of tone of S1 in this series

That's such great feedback, Lunie - thanks very much for that! I've been *loving* writing the S1 stuff, so I'm so glad to hear that you feel the tone is right :)

Thanks for the comment!