New Fic: First Time for Everything (6/10): NC-17: B/J

[xhaleslowly]

Before I get into the fic, I'd like to send a very belated thank you to all the folks that sent me love at the QAF love meme a few weeks back. I'm sometimes out of the loop on these things, so apologies for the late response, but I want you guys to know how much it means to me and how much I truly appreciated it. It's that kind of generosity of

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[xhaleslowly]

*grins* Thanks for letting me know you liked it :)

[secretsolitaire]

Ye gods, that was hot. *pants* There's such an intensity to the scene, with Justin clearly feeling just shy of overwhelmed -- but Brian's presence manages to reassure him. I love the undercurrent of trust and affection between them.

Kisses bury in the tender inside of your ass cheeks, the tickle-scratch of a beard contrasting against smooth lips and you shiver in anticipation of the touch, of the lick, of the... and then it's there, an unknown tongue working it's way into your ass, and you drop your forehead against Brian's chest, feel your cock throb against his pubes, his own pushed into your belly, wet, and you look up at him, see his closed eyes and open mouth, head tilted back as he gives into his own pleasure

[xhaleslowly]

Many thanks for this - I'm glad to hear you got that sense of trust between them. I felt it was important for this "first" and really wanted to convey it without beating the reader over the head with it.

And thanks also for pulling out that part... I had that image in my head and just had to write it ;) Glad it worked for you!

[ragingpixie]

Lovely, dearheart. Just beautiful. Miss you. :x

[xhaleslowly]

Sweet pie!!! So very very good to hear from you :)

Miss you muchly, darling girl. Hope life is treating you well and you're writing lots and lots :X :X :X

[vlredreign]

I love a good orgy story, but I haven't found very many, and none set at the baths. I've often wondered what Justin's first time there was like. I imagined him being scared and overwhelmed, and excited beyond all measure.

This was what I imagined. Holy shit, Ethan. It was hot, it was nasty, it was...damn, I can't think of anything else, you asplodied my brain!! the ending was perfect. Even early on, Brian was quite careful in his teachings to Justin, and he made sure that Justin felt safe. Even down to washing him afterwards.

What a story. Think I'll go lay down, now. :)

[xhaleslowly]

Well I will admit that writing this "first" was the most challenging of them all - I've never written an orgy scene or even really much at the baths (maybe one fic). So I'm very very glad to hear that you liked it so much and that it felt true to what you imagined his first time would be like :)

Thanks so much for this great feedback - it's so appreciated :X

[metafascinating]

Aaamazing...and hot as usual!
Thank you :)

[xhaleslowly]

Thank you! So glad you enjoyed it :)