New Fic: First Time for Everything (6/10): NC-17: B/J

[xhaleslowly]

Before I get into the fic, I'd like to send a very belated thank you to all the folks that sent me love at the QAF love meme a few weeks back. I'm sometimes out of the loop on these things, so apologies for the late response, but I want you guys to know how much it means to me and how much I truly appreciated it. It's that kind of generosity of

Comments

First Time #6

[fansee]

Wow! Well worth waiting for. M-wah! FanSee

Re: First Time #6

[xhaleslowly]

Aw, many thanks, FanSee. I hope I won't keep you guys waiting as long for the next one, though I know myself too well to make any promises ;)

Re: First Time #6

[fansee]

Stumbled over this exchange in my queue and realized I hadn't written you in a while. Hope all is well. I frequently think of you fondly and reread a couple of your fics from time to time. You know you're my hero, don't you? FanSee

[cherrygurl31]

Wow. That was so incredibly HOT and well written! You are simply amazing!!

[xhaleslowly]

Thanks so much for this - I'm glad to hear you felt it was well-written. That's always such great feedback to get :)

[sandid]

You are the master....

It's always a joy, Ethan.

Thanks

[xhaleslowly]

Many many thanks, Sandi :)

[not_yet_defined]

wow that was intense. you captured justin's nervousness, fascination and desire so unbelievably well. i could feel all three of those things myself as i read. it was ungodly hot. the imagery was amazing. it almost played like a slow motion movie. And through it all you could feel that brian understood perfectly what this experience was like for justin and was taking care of him the whole time, which made the ending a perfect compliment to the orgy at the baths. i've never been one to really dig when other people are present in fics with b/j sexually because it feels like you lose some of their intimacy, but this wasn't the case at all here. if anything it was the reverse, the intimacy between brian and justin was completely heightened the way you described this scenario. i think this is your best yet of the series. really really fantastic.

[xhaleslowly]

Wow, I can't thank you enough for this great feedback - you seemed to get all the things I was hoping readers would from this fic, and I appreciate you sharing that with me. I admit that I did find this one more of a challenge as I do really prefer writing the one-on-one scenes (that's mostly why this fic took me so long to write!lol!) - but because it was such a challenge, it's very reassuring to hear that you still felt the intimacy between the characters, despite there being many other "players" in this experience. I really was really wanting readers to take that feeling away from this fic.

Thank again so much for the feedback - it's truly appreciated!

[bdeviled]

That...it...I...um...::sigh::

You've reduced me to a babbling fool. :-D And I love it!

[xhaleslowly]

Oh good, that was the desired effect ;) lol!

Thanks for the comment!