New Fic: First Time for Everything (6/10): NC-17: B/J

Jul 02, 2007 18:33

Before I get into the fic, I'd like to send a very belated thank you to all the folks that sent me love at the QAF love meme a few weeks back. I'm sometimes out of the loop on these things, so apologies for the late response, but I want you guys to know how much it means to me and how much I truly appreciated it. It's that kind of generosity of ( Read more... )

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xie_xie_xie July 3 2007, 03:32:54 UTC
You know how to talk to him now, without saying a word.

Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful...

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xhaleslowly July 4 2007, 04:18:36 UTC
Thanks so much for pulling out that line, Xie. To be honest, I agonized over the ending, so I'm very glad to hear it worked for you :)

Many thanks for the comment!

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luceononuro July 3 2007, 03:36:20 UTC
Who wouldn't want to be loved like this ...

absolutely beautiful

XOXOXOXO

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xhaleslowly July 4 2007, 04:19:51 UTC
I'm so glad you got that sense of love from this fic. I wanted readers to take that away with them after reading it, so thanks for letting me know you did :)

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mdlaw July 3 2007, 03:52:33 UTC
OH MY!!! m :O

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xhaleslowly July 4 2007, 04:20:41 UTC
Love the little :O face!! lol! Thanks m :)

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beathen July 3 2007, 03:54:28 UTC
Ethan, you definitely outdid yourself with this one! Bravo. These descriptions are so hot! This really blew me away! (You don't want to know how many times I had to re-read a sentence because the imagery in my head kept distracting me!) (You're making me wish I were a gay man.)

I thought this story was fantastic. I love that Justin shows his trust in Brian in this new situation that he's nervous about. But then at the end of the story his personal realization is that he now knows how "to talk to him now, without saying a word." That's very beautiful and touching.

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xhaleslowly July 4 2007, 04:25:20 UTC
Thanks so much for this, beathen. And I'm so glad you enjoyed the imagery - I love to load my fics with it so it's good to hear it worked for you :)

As always, the feedback is much appreciated!

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itsjustkristen July 3 2007, 04:43:50 UTC
What a fantastic bedtime story! ;)

Thanks Ethan!

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xhaleslowly July 4 2007, 04:25:51 UTC
So glad you enjoyed it! I was hoping to give you all sweet dreams ;)

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