Plans

Jun 09, 2006 22:43

Plans
By Xie

My first fiction ... be gentle. This is part one, there will be three parts. They will come quickly. This story is told in alternating points of view, and one of them is somewhat unusual. I ask you to trust me. I promise it will be ok.

This is an angst-free zone. It is post-513 therapy for us all.

With many thanks to my hot Italian beta ( Read more... )

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chrisyeap June 10 2006, 12:05:48 UTC
Always enjoyed reading your posts on qaf_coffeeclub. Especially when you're "yammering" with vamphile. When you mentioned you were writing a fic, the anticipation was high (since I'm now extremely selective of what I read). This was definitely worth the wait and beyond expectation.

Waiting with baited breath for the next part!

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xie_xie_xie June 10 2006, 19:27:00 UTC
OMG, vamphile and I don't yammer, we're having extremely deep philisophical discussions of critical issues with vast implications for the whole structure of society.

Or talking about spanking Justin. OK, we're yammering.

Hearing that someone who is extremely selective not only read my story but found it beyond expectation, has made my day. Which is already a pretty fantastic day. This feedback thing is totally addictive.

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chrisyeap June 11 2006, 00:25:50 UTC
Let's face it - LJ IS addictive. And I'm only selective now AFTER months of sifting thru tons of bad!fic BEFORE i joined LJ and got all the wonderful people on LJ to rec the good stuff!!

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shadownyc June 10 2006, 12:18:00 UTC
This is absolutely fantastic!!!!
You are definitely a good writer of fiction as well as non-fiction. I love the POV's that you chose to use, it makes the story very original and creative.

I love Justin's plan. The concept is genius and totally IC! I can't wait to read more. :D

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xie_xie_xie June 10 2006, 19:28:07 UTC
Thank you thank you! And of course Justin's genius is IC, because Justin is a genius. Brian said so, I believe it, and that's enough for me. ;)

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shadownyc June 10 2006, 23:05:40 UTC
Justin is a genius. Brian said so, I believe it, and that's enough for me.

ITA--It's in canon (405). Brian's always honest!

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sandid June 10 2006, 12:30:01 UTC
It's been a long time since I've read any fanfic outside my normal confort zone. I read the first few paragraphs and needed to know more. I'm pleased. Very pleased. What a nice good morning for me. Last night I was missing the old days. I watched a few of season one. I love them so. Now, this morning....you reminded me again why there has never been anything like Brian and Justin. Why so many of us just can't let go.

This is where I'm supposed to say I'll be patiently waiting for the next chapter. Ummmm, patience. Not my storng suit. Can you hurry? Please.

Thanks, I did really like Mel's POV - I'm still mad at Lindsay.

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xie_xie_xie June 10 2006, 19:29:38 UTC
OMG, you're killing me in my heart. THANK YOU!

And I'm mad at Lindsay too. But she's Gus' mom so I'm going to find a way to stay in character and consistent with canon and fix her shit. Because I have to.

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Kudos bernadettecin June 10 2006, 12:36:06 UTC
It's great and you are very brave to start posting. Looking forward to more.
A lurker

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tamalinn June 10 2006, 12:37:56 UTC
*makes fist and taps vein* I NEED MORE NOW!!!! *shakes and sweats*

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